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Everything You've Ever Lost Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jaymee Thomas 15/01/2024


Unique things we've lost over the years,
Near to our concerns all the time.
Rewinding the time is not possible.
Eager conquers our existence 
Chosing one thing that is gone.
One piece of our life difficult to get again.
Valuable love with no condition I would choose.
Especially you, the one I can't take from that box.
Really mum, I would like to.
Above the rainbow you send me inspiration everyday.
Balance tries to be recovered after you were gone.
Lights are bright, and you are the main star.
Excellent as you were, I would spend my life looking for you

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Date: 1/19/2024 2:10:00 AM
All children love their mother. Brilliant poem.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/19/2024 2:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor. Blessings!
Date: 1/19/2024 1:57:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Maria ... Acrostic is not the easiest thing to write ... love it :) - hugs
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/19/2024 2:44:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne. You are right. Not easy to write at all. I'm glad you like it. Have a nice day Anne. Hugsxxx
Date: 1/15/2024 4:56:00 PM
enjoyed Maria this touching tribute to all mums, we all feel that way for life resting, have a sweet day poet
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/15/2024 5:01:00 PM
Thank you my love I appreciated it.. Have the best week
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