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Everything You've Ever Lost Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jaymee Thomas 15/01/2024

Unique things we've lost over the years, Near to our concerns all the time. Rewinding the time is not possible. Eager conquers our existence Chosing one thing that is gone. One piece of our life difficult to get again. Valuable love with no condition I would choose. Especially you, the one I can't take from that box. Really mum, I would like to. Above the rainbow you send me inspiration everyday. Balance tries to be recovered after you were gone. Lights are bright, and you are the main star. Excellent as you were, I would spend my life looking for you

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/19/2024 2:10:00 AM

All children love their mother. Brilliant poem.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/19/2024 2:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Victor. Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/19/2024 1:57:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Maria ... Acrostic is not the easiest thing to write ... love it :) - hugs

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/19/2024 2:44:00 AM

Thank you very much Anne. You are right. Not easy to write at all. I'm glad you like it. Have a nice day Anne. Hugsxxx

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/15/2024 4:56:00 PM

enjoyed Maria this touching tribute to all mums, we all feel that way for life resting, have a sweet day poet

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/15/2024 5:01:00 PM

Thank you my love I appreciated it.. Have the best week

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/15/2024 4:12:00 PM

a brilliant Acrostic and an excellent response to the "Everything You Ever Lost" contest. It flows and I can feel sincerity and some heartache in the words. No matter the type of poetry, your beautiful voice shines through. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/15/2024 4:27:00 PM

Sara, you are so nice all the time, that for me it ' s the best when somebody as you counts every word that I wrote. Thank you my dear friend. Love is sent from my heartxxx