Unrealistic Beauty

Beauty is something which is a gift not a right
Something that it pleasing and pleasant to someone’s sight

But there are different types of beauty some out of the ordinary
I’ve come across one that is truly extraordinary

A beauty to compare with this one you surly will find no other
To find beauty at its true peek there is no need to look any further

A beauty which can not be tamed by flaws or any kind of imperfection
To try and understand how such beauty exist is quite simply perplexing

The beauty I’ve seen is pure and flawless and as for blemishes there is no sign
When in the presents of this impeccable beauty you have seen beauty at its prime

A beauty exceeding the bounds of reason and to complex for imagination
This is truly what was in mind when beauty was brought into creation

A beauty which reveals the superb and completeness of perfection
Because in no way form or fashion does this beauty need any correction

Some may think I’m distorting the truth and that there is and never was such beauty
But with just a glance of this beauty’s face you’ll agree honestly and truly

A beauty which is not confined by mere appearance but has an equal beauty within
To try and fathom the depths of this inner beauty to explain I could not begin

A beauty that is stunning to the eyes and bewildering to the mind
A beauty that will take your breath away and has reached a new degree of fine

Despite all of my words I’m still not eloquent enough to help you to comprehend
The beauty I’ve seen in appearance and the beauty I’ve seen within

When it comes down to it mans mediocre words can’t and won’t help to describe
This unrealistic beauty I’ve seen I know because I just tried.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/5/2008 6:06:00 PM
great way to weave beauty into thought and actually succeed at making me believe it, look you are going to do wat better than this here, one poem, i know you can do better than this. one a day atleast.
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Date: 10/16/2008 5:32:00 AM
Certainly, beauty has a special spark in my heart. I like the flow of the words in this wonderful poem. This is soft and inspiring. Stay beautiful and welcome to Poetry Soup. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/15/2008 6:54:00 AM
You were very eloquent, you said it beautifully! Beauty within is what counts! ~ Carrie
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