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Unreal

Tears on my face pouring down like the rain A past that always haunts me like a stubborn stain Heart tore to pieces in so much pain Lips on my face that no longer smile Laughter in my soul not heard in a while Spirit so beaten it refuses to stand Future so far I can't grasp in my hand Things happen in life I don't comprehend I wish I could write nice sappy poems Of love and the future, and a house that's a home Tired of replaying this same sad song Not being so weak and standing up strong Then I would be writing of things I don't feel Then this poem would be something that to me is not real

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/1/2012 9:52:00 PM
WOW! i felt every word! Keep writing!!!!
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Carmen Castro
Date: 6/2/2012 12:47:00 PM
Thanks : )
Date: 6/1/2012 2:21:00 PM
I can feel your desire for happiness in your poem. If writing makes you feel the least bit better, I encourage you to continue writing.
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Carmen Castro
Date: 6/1/2012 2:48:00 PM
Very true indeed : )

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