Unreachable Love

Home was no longer her home.
Thoughts of survival clouded her future.
She dragged the boulder tied to her feet,
each reluctance etched upon her face.

She walked through the dark night,
blending her body with a silhouette.
Together they moved, hiding her from her past,
exposing her to a blurred tomorrow—
of uncertainty, hopelessness, and danger.

The strangeness of his accent carried her beyond mountains~
where birds croaked like frogs seeking mates.

“Why waste this beauty in the cold?”
She wondered if beauty had finally found her face.
No one had ever used that word
to clothe her eighteen years of ugliness.
Perhaps he knew she was new to the street, but she cared less.
To be called beautiful was relief enough.

Years of grief dissolved in a second.
She smiled—transient, delicately fragile—
as joy briefly veiled the tears
that darkness hid from him.

He took her home.
Suddenly, home became beautiful—
not rotten wood, not smelly gutters.
She met his youngest child first—her age mate,
then two others, older by years.

Disappointment pricked her heart:
she could not lie upon his chest,
could not whisper darling—
a word stolen from her lips twenty-five years earlier
by a stranger who now calls her “daughter.”

Yet the word still burned like an ember on her tongue.
She longed to taste it,
but she knew it would be bitter.

She loved this kind stranger—
but her love for him remained 
u n r e a c h a b l e.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 9:17 AM
Dear Maclawrence, your use of poignant imagery and impactful metaphors is masterful and the pain is palpable. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Famuyiwa Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 10:16 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comment.
Famuyiwa Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 9:58 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comment.
Agustin Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 11:59 PM
Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Famuyiwa Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 12:27 AM
Thanks and God bless you too Beata.
Godwin Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 11:28 PM
I'm with Andrea, the 'p' words, poignant and profound! Congratulations
Famuyiwa Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 10:48 AM
Thanks. You are a darling.
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 9:10 PM
wow, so poignant and profound. I believed I had seen your name in the winner list, and I am glad to see this poem. Congrats
Famuyiwa Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 9:29 PM
Yeah Andrea, thanks.
Toney Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 2:45 PM
Maclawrence, this is a haunting poem of pain. How sad her early trauma results in love being unreachable. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 20 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 21 has already started. You can find your current standing in my Mile 20 Checkpoint blog post.
Famuyiwa Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 10:48 AM
Well appreciated.
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