Unquiet

soaring upon a brisk winter breeze
my mind on fast forward surfing
along in opposite directions cant
slow down the breeze up lifting
my entire self  my cheeks blood 
red twisting, turning whizzing by
flying thru the sky  white fluffy
clouds a hand span away
like my mind almost so
close to scramble back
together thats creeping its 
way slowly slipping away
in this unquiet mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 22, 2010 at 11:43 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Jessica. Wishing you a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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