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If there were no times We would mime in dark of blind Proofed sea brine as lime -November 05, 2018 Chattogram

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Date: 11/10/2018 7:32:00 PM
Dear Mahtab: Nicely done. Leon
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Date: 11/6/2018 6:24:00 PM
I agree with Caren on that middle line. A very creative senryu.
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Date: 11/6/2018 1:04:00 PM
I second Caren's comment below. Evocative imagery, my friend. Best wishes, gw
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Date: 11/5/2018 7:23:00 AM
"mime in dark of blind" - wow! This is a terrific feeling brought on by great imagery.
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