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Unpredictable Morning

The morning sun falls Noises awake, passing crowds once quiet again Stand on the cold feet Dew still not fade by the lights Sipping my hot tea Rectangle door closed The framework offers the view My sight clustered straight Enjoyed the greenish While the sun turns into gloom It's ready to rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/23/2013 7:23:00 PM
Great write, I love the unpredictable mornings and rainy days.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/25/2013 5:30:00 AM
Thank you Joana :) glad to have you in my page :D have a great day :) hug, yanny
Date: 2/12/2013 8:23:00 PM
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/12/2013 9:52:00 PM
:D
Date: 2/7/2013 9:00:00 PM
Coffee because I am not a tea person.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/7/2013 9:17:00 PM
Coffee could be better :D sometimes I had morning coffee too :D thank you Rick for your lovely visit, really a pleasure to have your present this morning :D , wishing you a great afternoon there :D - hug, yanny
Date: 2/7/2013 8:59:00 PM
I hope you awake to a day as sunny as your disposition. Hugs Rick. I enjoyed this poem, wish I could join you for a coffee.
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Date: 2/6/2013 2:33:00 PM
Hello Yanny, a very deep imagery.. hope you will enjoy what is to come..it rain here this morning... i enjoyed waking up to the not knowing.. LOL.. excellent poem...PD
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/6/2013 4:40:00 PM
Thank you Linda, your visit always make my day :D, have a wonderful day there :D - hug, yanny
Date: 2/5/2013 12:37:00 AM
Lovely poem.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/5/2013 2:34:00 AM
Thank you Vesna :D - hug, yanny
Date: 2/4/2013 11:51:00 PM
You should see my state of Utah , we have so many days where the weather keeps changing all within one day. This reminds me of those days! very nice, Yanny
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/5/2013 2:35:00 AM
Wow, that's really a new thing for me, must be surprising day Andrea, thank you for your visit, glad to see you a round, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny