Yanny Widjanarko Poet Haiku

Unpredictable Morning

The morning sun falls
Noises awake, passing crowds
once quiet again

Stand on the cold feet
Dew still not fade by the lights
Sipping my hot tea

Rectangle door closed
The framework offers the view
My sight clustered straight

Enjoyed the greenish
While the sun turns into gloom
It's ready to rain

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Joanna Smith March 23, 2013 at 7:23 PM Great write, I love the unpredictable mornings and rainy days. Yanny Widjanarko March 25, 2013 at 5:30 AM Thank you Joana :) glad to have you in my page :D have a great day :) hug, yanny

... Gigno February 12, 2013 at 8:23 PM !!! Yanny Widjanarko February 12, 2013 at 9:52 PM :D

Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2013 at 9:00 PM Coffee because I am not a tea person. Yanny Widjanarko February 7, 2013 at 9:17 PM Coffee could be better :D sometimes I had morning coffee too :D thank you Rick for your lovely visit, really a pleasure to have your present this morning :D , wishing you a great afternoon there :D - hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2013 at 8:59 PM I hope you awake to a day as sunny as your disposition. Hugs Rick. I enjoyed this poem, wish I could join you for a coffee.

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2013 at 2:33 PM Hello Yanny, a very deep imagery.. hope you will enjoy what is to come..it rain here this morning... i enjoyed waking up to the not knowing.. LOL.. excellent poem...PD Yanny Widjanarko February 6, 2013 at 4:40 PM Thank you Linda, your visit always make my day :D, have a wonderful day there :D - hug, yanny

Vesna Kovrlija February 5, 2013 at 12:37 AM Lovely poem. Yanny Widjanarko February 5, 2013 at 2:34 AM Thank you Vesna :D - hug, yanny

Andrea Dietrich February 4, 2013 at 11:51 PM You should see my state of Utah , we have so many days where the weather keeps changing all within one day. This reminds me of those days! very nice, Yanny Yanny Widjanarko February 5, 2013 at 2:35 AM Wow, that's really a new thing for me, must be surprising day Andrea, thank you for your visit, glad to see you a round, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny