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UNPACKED

Nothing arrives whole.  
Everything comes folded~  
creased at the edges,  
tucked into itself  
like a secret that forgot  
how long it has been carried.

To be unpacked  
is to let the day exhale,  
to open the small, stubborn corners  
where memory hides  
like lint in a pocket.

I lift each moment  
from its hiding place~  
a peach warm in my palm,  
a kitchen light trembling  
on the rim of a glass,  
a childhood street  
still smelling faintly  
of percolator coffee  
and women laughing  
in their housecoats.

Unpacked,  
the world softens.  
It stops pretending  
to be tidy.

It spills~  
slow, honest,  
like a drawer finally opened  
after years of silence.

And I stand there
my hands full of the past
realizing none of it
was ever lost.
It was only waiting 
for me
to unfold it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:05 PM
I enjoyed reading your "UNPACKED." Fun Picture... I have packed/unpacked many, many times over the years. Have a Lovely/Blessed Day Writing Away............
Poet Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 2:01 PM
Sara, this is an excellent poem with great wording and imagery. I really like the title's dual purpose. That is both profound and brilliant! A fantastic contest submission! Best wishes to you with the contest
Kauffman Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 12:07 PM
What a great metaphor, Sara! Love the double entendre in your title. This is so very clever yet full of meaning! It would be a great contest entry! Sending you blessings without wrinkles or bent corners!
Rolland Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 8:27 AM
sometimes we are overreacting i guess, i would have do the same, nicely written
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