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It was a never-ending slog sequential acts are untamed and stochastic but ultimately all perish genesis and epilogue that sums up life perfectly man can bridge the life-death chasm love abounds even with death one precedes for another must follow yet, doesn't that entail a frame? Is our serendipity hollow? indomitable, invincible If death is truly the ending yet, life may be born from death God, who gave us life, inhaled our dying soul so, after many years of life's last breath will death be granted life? the life-death boundary is shallow Yes, it is the answer life is nothing but a dream hence, it certainly makes sense What might this possibly impart? that dreams require dreamers or there wouldn't be any angel of death possibly this is the way life is in the spiral of unwavering dreams seraphic saneness or demonic sadness strives over a common goal that there is doom and gloom as well as tomorrow. Written: October 27, 2022 Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 10/28/2022 5:57:00 AM
Much to gleam here through journey of life my friend. There is doom and gloom but also hope of tomorrow.
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Date: 10/28/2022 1:15:00 AM
Many declare they are not afraid of death. I doubt it.
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Date: 10/27/2022 6:35:00 PM
"will death be granted life?" A curious twist with an intriguing alure. Sometimes, somehow, death seems the sweetest of all. If only to be so lucky :-)
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