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The world wants a torch but I only wished to be a candlelight. It gives dim light but will never scorch Though it will never be a highlight but it can be your hope tonight. The world think highly of leader but my eyes admire those who serve Leaders may seems stronger It is all because those who are willing to serve Even if it will lead them to their grave The world wants a raging water But I only want to be in still Does it even matter? There is nothing more for me to fulfill To become greater is what the world wants to instill. By: Doris Jamoner - 01/28/2015

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Date: 3/23/2016 11:59:00 AM
awesome poem, Doris. LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 4:27:00 PM
Doris, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT **
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Date: 2/8/2015 1:14:00 AM
The world craves to own your success...to control your luscious flame...share what you can, and keep what you must Doris. We all serve passion...greatness cannot remain still Poetess. To be a true hope, now that is serving, and leading at the same time. A poem fit for a King or Queen. J.A.B.
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 2/10/2015 10:36:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful words : )
Date: 2/4/2015 7:57:00 AM
Goodness is uneventful, it does not flash, it glows but its presence radiates within the lines of this poem. Emile.
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 2/10/2015 10:36:00 AM
Thank You : )
Date: 1/29/2015 11:16:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..Stillness is good for sure..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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