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Unmired

Don’t count on luck when you are stuck; It’s fickle and unheeding. A little pluck may help unmuck Your journey to succeeding. Don’t pass the buck or try to duck When problems have you sinking. Let others cluck or run amok While you, instead, start thinking. You may be struck by train or truck Before you get unmired, But brains and pluck, when things just suck, May get what you’ve desired. (inspired by the movie “Joy”)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/9/2016 12:53:00 PM
Wow! Great use of uncommon words. I really liked this. A classic.
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Date: 1/7/2016 2:27:00 PM
Lovely rhyme Ilene it's not a film I know:-) hugs Jan xx
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