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.    Invented                                                   Self
.       carefully                                              assembled
.        porcelain                                          smiles
.         borrowed                                      voices
.             stitched                                  convictions
.            measured                              glances lowered
.               well-worn                          pathways
.                   mirrored                      gestures
.                        doubts                  parried away
.                        excuses              ironed smooth
.                         certainty          wearing thin
.                           the mask      slips sideways
.                               daylight  finds the cracks
.                                    UNMASKED
.                                silence   resettles
.                               breath      returns
.                                eyes          meet themselves
.                             dawn              arrives
.                          edges                  grow stronger
.              echoes lose                      their walls
.          depth shows                           through focus
.              old scars                              catch the light
.          nothing is                                  left to hide
.        old voices                                      fall silent 
.    hall mirrors                                          crack wide open
.       the skin                                              fits again
. The within                                                  Comes home
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July 1, 2026 at 10:49 PM
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