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Unmade Time

your eyes seem to cry my mind so blank to the thoughts the bed where we lay seem to stay unmade the house so calm and quite ,movement has gorn the stairs seem to creak to the silence of the night i sit alone rocking back and forth in my chair the brandy bottle so empty the night sky seems to make me cry you left me on my own so,so ever cold my heart will slow my mind will stop now I'm forever watch the clock . the nightwalker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/15/2010 9:54:00 AM
Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Duncan. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2010 5:54:00 AM
Very interesting and passionate thoughts you have penned so well, duncan
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