Unmade Time

your eyes seem to cry

my mind so blank to the thoughts

the bed where we lay seem to stay unmade

the house so calm and quite ,movement has gorn

the stairs seem to creak to the silence of the night

i sit alone rocking back and forth in my chair

the brandy bottle so empty

the night sky seems to make me cry

you left me on my own so,so ever cold

my heart will slow my mind will stop now I'm forever watch the clock .
  

the nightwalker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 9:54 AM
Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Duncan. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol
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October 15, 2010 at 5:54 AM
Very interesting and passionate thoughts you have penned so well, duncan
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