Unloved

Unloved
beaten since birth
a prostitute mother 
pimp's refusal to pay abort 
estranged 
 
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Contest:  Traditional Cinquain Contest
Sponsor: Catie Lindsey
Submitted by: Judy Konos

lifecinquain

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James Foulk

April 19, 2011 at 4:04 PM

a great piece of poetry Judy, enjoyed readng it

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 19, 2011 at 5:26 AM

Congratulations Judy on your well deserved win in Catie's contest "Traditional Cinquain". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 17, 2011 at 5:40 AM

Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, Judy

Francine Roberts

April 16, 2011 at 8:55 PM

tragic poem, congrats on your win in the contest

Black Eyed Susan

April 16, 2011 at 3:03 PM

Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 16, 2011 at 1:30 PM

Congrats Judy on your big win in this contest .. very creative entry luv..enjoy your win..

Kash Poet

April 16, 2011 at 1:18 PM

this is an excellent Cinquain.Congrats on your win,Judy---kashinath

Michael J. Falotico

April 16, 2011 at 9:13 AM

And you my dear write outside the lines as my Poem says.. Great way to attack this contest.. Thanks for feeling my write.. Michael

Gautami Phookan

April 15, 2011 at 10:13 AM

A very touching poem Judy.An altogether different approach to an unloved child.Good luck in the contest,LOve ,Gautami

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 14, 2011 at 9:17 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Judy. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find even more inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. The best to you in the contest. Have a great day. Love, Carol

Stacey Watts

April 14, 2011 at 6:27 AM

This is very expressive, powerful and sad. Tells so much in such a small poem.

Jeff Morehead

April 14, 2011 at 5:40 AM

sad, powerful words.... God help the child. jeff

Dr Hitendra Mehta

April 14, 2011 at 3:40 AM

Nice crisp short poetic story. best wishes for contest. Thanks Judy for encouraging comment on my work "defrosting at will". Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta