Unloved

Unloved beaten since birth a prostitute mother pimp's refusal to pay abort estranged *** Contest: Traditional Cinquain Contest Sponsor: Catie Lindsey Submitted by: Judy Konos

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James Foulk

Date: 4/19/2011 4:04:00 PM

a great piece of poetry Judy, enjoyed readng it

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 5:26:00 AM

Congratulations Judy on your well deserved win in Catie's contest "Traditional Cinquain". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/17/2011 5:40:00 AM

Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, Judy

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/16/2011 8:55:00 PM

tragic poem, congrats on your win in the contest

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/16/2011 3:03:00 PM

Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/16/2011 1:30:00 PM

Congrats Judy on your big win in this contest .. very creative entry luv..enjoy your win..

Kash Poet

Date: 4/16/2011 1:18:00 PM

this is an excellent Cinquain.Congrats on your win,Judy---kashinath

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/16/2011 9:13:00 AM

And you my dear write outside the lines as my Poem says.. Great way to attack this contest.. Thanks for feeling my write.. Michael

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/15/2011 10:13:00 AM

A very touching poem Judy.An altogether different approach to an unloved child.Good luck in the contest,LOve ,Gautami

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/14/2011 9:17:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Judy. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find even more inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. The best to you in the contest. Have a great day. Love, Carol

Stacey Watts

Date: 4/14/2011 6:27:00 AM

This is very expressive, powerful and sad. Tells so much in such a small poem.

Jeff Morehead

Date: 4/14/2011 5:40:00 AM

sad, powerful words.... God help the child. jeff

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 4/14/2011 3:40:00 AM

Nice crisp short poetic story. best wishes for contest. Thanks Judy for encouraging comment on my work "defrosting at will". Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2011 10:24:00 PM

I like the two synonyms unloved and estranged. A very interesting approach, Judy.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/13/2011 5:41:00 PM

Sad and touchy write, Good luck in the contest, Judy