Unloading

Laughing at life;
Ain’t that kickin against the goad?
Or is that makin’ light 
of a heavy load?

You can cry all day 
in deepest sorrow,
Knowing there’s a chance,
You’ll laugh tomorrow.

But if you don’t have that hope,
don’t even start.
Else you’ll never stop,
It’ll tear you apart.

If the pain is too much 
to stay where you are.
Do what you must, 
to heal that scar.

Ask for help,
from the Highest Power.
And that painful time, 
will be your finest hour.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 7:43 PM
Ah Robert, such wise words penned in great style. It flows so well and the last verse gives a wonderful closure. Hope we don't run out of things to say in the new year. All the best, Lizzie
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 4:57 AM
Stopping by this morning to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry very much Robert. I want to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. May the sun always shine upon you and bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol
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April 30, 2011 at 8:42 PM
Oh I forgot to tell you, you have soupmail! :
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April 30, 2011 at 8:54 AM
Very interested, thought provoking write, very well written, Robert! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
Foulk Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 11:33 AM
thank you for reading and commenting on Our Dog Dusty.
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April 20, 2011 at 2:07 PM
Rob, I try to laugh at life, but when I need help, I turn to the "Highest Power" as well. A very inspirational write. I wish more folks would realize that He is always listening. As the Rolling Stones' song goes, "You can't always get what you want...you get what you need." Enjoyed reading this uplifting poem. Love, Carolyn
Foulk Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 1:14 PM
a great creative and well said piece of poetry. thank you for your comment on Spring Time Follies.
Austin Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 6:56 AM
Love this poem, Robert. The second stanza is typical of a feel-sorry-for-myself person. The last stanza really works. More down-and-outers should try it. Love, Dave
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April 20, 2011 at 12:09 AM
So true! If we call upon the Lord, even the worst times become lessons that lead us to a highter plane of awareness...and a little closer to the joy of being. Our Heavenly Father brings happiness to a humble soul, making life joyful. Nice poetry, Robert.
M Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 8:20 PM
Positive attitude ! Nice write
Neels Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 1:21 PM
So much to take away from this write of yours Robert, awesome piece on renewal and hope.. Good read to meditate on before bed.. Hope the week ahead will be a blessed one for you ;) love Wilma
Onclaud Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 1:06 PM
the Light glows in this wondruous work of art.. i am soothed, robert.. may we see God in all creation... so fine, fine! winning's best to you..:) hugggs, nette
Haick Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 11:31 AM
Hi Robert, It's good to be reading you today. It's been a while. The only reason I'm on today is to leave comments on Prem. Mems. poems being featured this week. Glad I saw this by chance. Perfect title as we all need to unload,"empty" out so we can receive new gifts from God. Hoping you and family'll have a blessed Holy Week. Love,your friend, Annalise
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