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god has taken away,something from a soulmates soul, nothing precious,nothing glod,nothing precious nor old. but the thing which is gone is like a pearl from oysters mouth. and like the door which shows the was out. what is gone is like the sun's rays, and is to never come back like those winter dark days. what is gone is somthing very colse, and was so attractive like bulb which always glows. who or what this "something", i am sure you must wonder, it was as bright as lightning and as loud as thunder. it was "he", a father of 1 year old, a husband of 25 yera old, a son of 60 year old , and an uncle to who ever he called "gold". god called him at a very young stage, where no one was ment to be laid. he was someone who no one betrayed, he was we called a "SOLDIER", he went to heaven with pleasure.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/22/2016 2:01:00 PM
shoana sharma, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2015 11:04:00 PM
well done..happy new years
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Date: 7/11/2011 9:59:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Shoana. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol
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