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god has taken away,something from a soulmates soul, nothing precious,nothing glod,nothing precious nor old. but the thing which is gone is like a pearl from oysters mouth. and like the door which shows the was out. what is gone is like the sun's rays, and is to never come back like those winter dark days. what is gone is somthing very colse, and was so attractive like bulb which always glows. who or what this "something", i am sure you must wonder, it was as bright as lightning and as loud as thunder. it was "he", a father of 1 year old, a husband of 25 yera old, a son of 60 year old , and an uncle to who ever he called "gold". god called him at a very young stage, where no one was ment to be laid. he was someone who no one betrayed, he was we called a "SOLDIER", he went to heaven with pleasure.

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Date: 9/26/2024 11:58:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/12/2011 4:29:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Shoana. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2011 6:10:00 PM
Lovely expressions, Shoana
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