Unlatched

So young myself, I was naive'
Without a doubt, I did believe
the babe, then latched, inside my womb
would cling to me eternally

Latched on, was he, as he was fed
Then later on, our hands instead
Not tall enough to open gates
I'd reach the latch for his escape

In time he grew to need more space
The bond we had, would stretch in place
and strain the threads that bound him home
He reached up high to join the wind
Yet ties remained, still ever strong

Years would pass, too soon, a man
Old ties would change, yet carry on
Love came along, as it should be
My eyes, if wise, must let it be 

This union blessed, was good to see
Her love for you, the world could see
It didn't mean my son was gone

Songs are sung when lovers part
But no song for a mother's heart
When new adventures come one day
Those new roads take him far away

The man he is, has been set free
To be the man he wants to be
The child he was is never gone
She's letting go, yet holding on

If once, one wish were mine to choose
So many do my thoughts pursue
But one within my heart still yearns
If just one day, the clocks would turn

Together you and I would be
Sitting here among the trees
I would hold you close, upon my knees
then turn you loose, to join the leaves...



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First Poem Submitted To Poetry Soup 
Written not long after the weddings of all three of my children
who were all married within 1-1/2 years of each other! 
I must have been feeling the empty nest blues and all the changes that came along !  :)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Barden Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 6:16 PM
This is just lovely, Carrie ... my kids are grown now, too, (the youngest is 30), but they still call me "Daddy" and kiss me, two girls, one boy. I was totally neglected by my father, (not his fault, really), so I vowed to hug and kiss mine until they asked me to stop ... they never asked me! They have the biggest hearts, and I'm so proud of who they are, and that we have so much love. This is a wonderful write, and I must add to my favs ... blessings and thanks for this charming reminder! <3
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January 6, 2019 at 7:45 PM
I haven't been here much of late, but so pleased to receive your kind comment, Gregory! This was written so long ago, but I share the sentiments with you about my own children. Mine must be near the same age as yours..( two boys and a girl). Like you, I am very proud of the adults they are, their loving hearts, and fine examples to their own children. You and I are very blessed!Thank you!
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November 17, 2017 at 9:06 AM
So beautiful, Carrie! It was well worth a visit to your first poem on PS! My son also is married! Posting “You Are My Sonshine”
Godwin Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 5:43 PM
An urge hit to read your first posted poem. Bad idea after the Darth Vador kindness because now I am totally emotional and missing my son. Beautiful poem, Carrie. Are all 3 of your children boys? I have but the one, and he is my heart ... CayCay
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February 14, 2016 at 5:50 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, CayCay. I have two sons and a daughter, and with all three, it has been one of the hardest things, to let them go. But we have to set them free, if we want them to know how much we truly love them.....as I'm sure you also know. Thanks again !!
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May 2, 2015 at 4:35 AM
I see the beginning of something very special indeed...
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March 8, 2015 at 12:52 PM
oh, Thank you so much for the congratulations and sweet reply. Love LINDA
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March 8, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Carrie, Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3
Richards Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 12:48 PM
Thank you PD......and again, a big congratulations on your new beautiful grandchild ! :)
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March 5, 2015 at 10:20 PM
Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Beginnings Matter Win ~SKAT~
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 2:31 PM
Lovely to look up and see how they have grown and become independent and how your life changes so much over time and congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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June 17, 2014 at 1:32 PM
Well, Carrie I really love this poem. Thought I go back to your first one and I'm so glad I did. Those are wonderful times to look back on and wish for. This one will go in my Faves. Well done my friend..... Robert.
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June 2, 2011 at 12:46 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
Neels Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:48 PM
Carrie, it felt like I was with you through every scene you describe.. Stunning imagery, I really enjoyed this write especially since I am freezing my butt off over here.. ;) congratulations on your win, love Wilma
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June 1, 2011 at 12:15 PM
A wonderful first poem on soup Carrie. Congrats on your fabulous win in pd's contest. love, gautami.
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June 1, 2011 at 8:32 AM
Many congrats on all your wins, Carrie : )
Taylor Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:20 AM
Congrats on your win, Carrie. Great job. xxxRalph
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June 1, 2011 at 7:03 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d. carrie
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June 1, 2011 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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June 1, 2011 at 3:53 AM
nice job and congrats for your big win..Cory
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May 31, 2011 at 11:37 PM
Carrie~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thank you for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D.
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May 31, 2011 at 10:12 PM
Totally Beautiful, Carrie! Really love how your poetry just takes me to that place-- this is another brilliant example of your talent! Congrats on your win! Super smiles as I read this (& haha wishing I a=can be as lucky as you are!) hugs :)
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May 31, 2011 at 9:29 PM
Congrats Carrie on another excellent win tonight ..luv..
Guzzi Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 6:19 AM
So wonderful those moments, precious beyond words. Light & Love
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December 18, 2009 at 1:02 PM
a day in a beautiful life. John Henry Loving III
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October 17, 2009 at 12:42 PM
Thanks for sharing Sunday on the porch. Different from my days on the porch but the same in a way that time alone to be with God. Keep writing. Sara
Lopez Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 9:26 AM
these are the moments that keep marriages together and healthy!!!!!
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April 2, 2009 at 2:40 PM
goodness! I've come late, but still came to the poetry party! fresh poem! thanks for good luck wishes on my senryu! Jim
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