Unknown Hand

My voice eat by my heart's deafening beat
No matter how I tried to catch my breath.
Why I couldn't reach for it?
Every time I'll try, still in the end
I burst into cry...
Why i have this kind of life?

A faint sound then i hear...
someone is calling me out there
Lending His hand to show me where.
My confused mind starts to think
Who is this man or is he a King?

Slowly i walked in my trembling knees,
Crossed-palm i walk through the street.
Finding answers to my curiosity
Who is behind the hand so good to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 10:08 AM
Evangeline excellent...David
Demate Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 10:26 PM
thank u dave :-)
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