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Unknown Ends

Time as stream flows Ages as the wind blows Experience as plant grows But the end no one knows Winter brings its thunder drops Summer hits our tender crops Nature keeps our finger crossed But the story never stops People as snow drops and dry Thrones as men lives and die Crowns as flowers fade at night But the play never seem to fly Sparrows up the sky croons Shadows on the wall zooms Our balls withrapt attention looks But time never seem to die so soon Our life: a play of suspence As the sky it seems it has no end As the oceans we peep to see its ends But what we only see is an unknown end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 6/20/2009 3:49:00 AM
Congrats on your featured Poem!<33 I actually Like this one=)
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Date: 6/18/2009 11:46:00 PM
Very nice poem my friend. Congratulations on this peom being featured this week. Hope to read some more. Ernilando
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Date: 6/16/2009 9:37:00 AM
Haaaa! its not easy getting the attention of a great poet! you are magnificent and awesome. A secret admirer that's what i am. I want to say big CONGRATULATIONS to you.make us proud.Right now, '' i dey feel like Obasanjo o! love.
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Date: 6/15/2009 2:26:00 PM
I love this poem, Adeleke...as time goes on and on....to think that the world will go on with no end, eternally..wow...Great write! Congratulations on this poem being featured this week. Love, Carrie
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Date: 6/15/2009 1:31:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 6/15/2009 9:43:00 AM
Adeleke, this is a poignant imagery of eternity. You certaily have captured the uncertain.
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Date: 6/15/2009 9:33:00 AM
Adeleke - I just wanted to stop by and say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/15/2009 8:57:00 AM
C O N G R AT U LA T I O N S--BRAVO!!CHARMA
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Date: 6/15/2009 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Adeleke. Always so wonderful to see your name here. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2009 5:05:00 AM
wow,../great write,..congrats on your feature this week !! james
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Date: 6/15/2009 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations Adeleke, on the featuring of "Unknown Ends." Vince
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Date: 6/15/2009 2:47:00 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured, wonderful wprk, God bless you from diane
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Date: 6/15/2009 12:19:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Adeleke .Rgds Brian
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