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Im drowning in a pool of tears
thinking about the last years

In a moment all things lost
was it really worth the cost

What will my future hold
only time knows what will unfold

Until then I'll sit and wait
for the day of my unkown fate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:12 AM
Amanda better to wait than wish your life away....David
Hunter Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 9:21 AM
I like the darkness of this one...
Gigno Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 7:37 AM
!!!
Mjelde Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Welcome to the soup, Amanda! Time wait for no one, we have to have fate in all the things we do in our lives! Great reading though! oxoxo Laila
Ink-U-Script Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 3:10 AM
This is beautifully written..and one day it will come..stay positive!! We go through trials to make us stronger!!
Grisetti Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 9:34 PM
This sounds so sad, or maybe just waiting to see what will happen. Sometimes you have to make it happen. Don't just wait for time.
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