Unknown

Expecting
not knowing, 
feeling 
somehow there is a plan
a bigger one
which I still don't understand, 
I go minute by minute 
for the first time
not looking out
but looking within, 

and then again
the doubts attack
the fears follow
and the tears come back

Where are you taking me
don't I need to know? 

You say second by second
when even that becomes so slow
where do you head from here
when there is nowHere to go?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Morgan Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 6:58 AM
amazing poem my favourite!
A  Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 8:50 PM
niCe OnE, giVeS thE rEaDer somETHing TO ThiNK aBout. INteReStInG wRiTe, ENjoYeD *LUV- S.K.A.T.
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 10:16 AM
Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Aida. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol
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