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SAD OR HAPPY? I FEEL KINDA SNAPPY. KINDA CONFUSED MYSELF? U KNOW HOW IT FEELS WHEN U GO BLANK? ITS LIKE U SEE BLACK OUT OF YOUR HEAD CANT THINK CAUSE THERE IS SO MUCH TO THINK OF CANT BE CREATIVE WHERE MY MIND IS WALKING ON CLOUD HEARING VOICE THROW MY HEAD OUT LOUD IT SEEMS EXTREMELY WOWED CAUSE I CANT THINK WITH THIS BLANK OUT. FEELING CONFUSED GETTING NERVOUS OF THE CHOOSES THAT I GOT TO MAKE IT WILL CAUSE THE FEATURE RUNNING WITH FEAR YET SMILING LIKE ITS NOTHING HAVING NO CLUE WHATS UP WITH ME YET I GOT ALL THESE MIX EMOTIONS RUNNING THROW ME FEELING EXCITED YET FEELING DOWN AM I GOING CRAZY? I CAUSE OUT OF NO WHERE I FEEL LIKE DANCING I AM FEELING UP AND DOWN EACH MINUTE CANT THINK, JUSTED PUSSED. DONT KNOW IF I AM SAD OR HAPPY?

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Edward Orozco

Date: 5/13/2009 3:10:00 PM

This is a very well written poem. I'm sure many people can connect to this piece. Awww the Alley below this comment is my future wifey I love her sooo much! - jeremiah

Alley Poe

Date: 5/12/2009 5:13:00 PM

I was just feeling like this earlier. Love this poem. Yes I love to paint. Watercolor, oil, even makeup. I will send you my email in your soup mail. -Alley

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/10/2009 2:06:00 AM

Every new birth becomes with a throbbing heart riled by its own excitment ... but only pain gives the birth ... the next poem is in your heart and not your head ... the head is always jealous and try to manipulate all thinking ... even this feeling here reveals something ... a mixing in of ingredients for a sweet recipe. I pass this way sometimes ... and just to sit with you ... a human moment.