Universal Laws 2

waking from
a dream of
falling

putting my
bare feet
to wood

floors
lightheaded
two stories

up i need to
walk down
stairs but

unlike a giant
step for man
kind i find

i'm outside
grass growing
between my toes

yet no roots
grounding
me i'm a

live wire
aspiring
to jump

trying to
touch the
moon 

so i throw
myself up
in the air

flapping
my arms but
even feathers

fall off of
a bird in
flight

landing
on the
earth

and try as i
might i 
can

only try
but i 
can

not do
what i want
for i must do

what is not
wanted but
that which i

have to
follow for
it's the law

of

g
 r
  a
   v
     i
      t
       y

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/4/2019 11:42:00 PM
" i'm a live wire aspiring to jump" - this is a wonderful poem and that part was my favorite until I reached gravity and saw how you typed it out and down.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/5/2019 6:33:00 AM
It's dragging us down Caren lol. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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