Saba Khan Poet Lyric

Unique Way To Propose

Be My Pizza
Be My Burger
I'll Be your Cold drink!
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Be My only!
Be my Lonely!
Be my only lonely girl!
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Without you I'm like sugar-free tea
Come to me My Milk Cadbury 
Add some color as of Red Cherry!
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Be my Life
Be My Wife
Let's cut the cake with knife!
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You're my very own!
But where've you gone?
Remembers you my every bone!
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Feeling Shy?
You're mine and I'm thy!
Come here! or else i'll die ;)

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Joseph May June 10, 2014 at 7:25 AM Wonderful write...thanks for stopping by Saba Khan June 11, 2014 at 3:41 AM Thank you :)

Poet Destroyer A May 25, 2014 at 9:22 AM Once again, Saba, thank you for the comments on my comments... Linda Saba Khan June 11, 2014 at 3:41 AM Thank you :)

Sara Kendrick May 24, 2014 at 8:38 AM Way to go with this top win..Congrats.Sara Saba Khan May 24, 2014 at 10:31 PM Thanks a lot :) :) :)

Living Faith May 23, 2014 at 9:02 PM lovely and exciting in each line ! thanks for your comment on my first poem ! xx Faith Saba Khan May 24, 2014 at 10:30 PM My pleasure :) Thank you too :)!

Poet Destroyer A May 23, 2014 at 8:58 AM By the way, The reason, this poem caught my attention, was the whole, _Be My, I'LL BE YOUR..... hahaha, the every bone was the sweetest and cutest thought. A really good feeling poem. Hugs, and love... Linda Saba Khan May 24, 2014 at 10:30 PM Haha..it really makes me smile whenever i'm feeling low :)

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2014 at 11:41 PM Saba, thank you for the comment on my comment. :) :) :) Saba Khan May 23, 2014 at 12:34 AM Thanks for arranging contest :) :)

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2014 at 9:41 PM Saba Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement.... Stop by my latest blog, "The Glass SLipper" if you'd like. Take Care, and enjoy a smile or two. XOX~ LINDA Saba Khan May 22, 2014 at 11:38 PM Thanks a lot :) :) :)

David Williams May 12, 2014 at 8:57 AM Saba an excellent take on modern life's similes ...David Saba Khan May 15, 2014 at 11:33 PM Thankssssssssssss :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 12, 2014 at 5:47 AM hahaha what a fun way to write.. :D i can feel the rush of excitement in each line except on the third paragraph.. :D it's downwards to lil sadness.. :), GBU, olive Saba Khan May 15, 2014 at 11:34 PM 3rd or 5th? hmm ? ;)