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Unique Way To Propose

Be My Pizza
Be My Burger
I'll Be your Cold drink!
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Be My only!
Be my Lonely!
Be my only lonely girl!
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Without you I'm like sugar-free tea
Come to me My Milk Cadbury 
Add some color as of Red Cherry!
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Be my Life
Be My Wife
Let's cut the cake with knife!
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You're my very own!
But where've you gone?
Remembers you my every bone!
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Feeling Shy?
You're mine and I'm thy!
Come here! or else i'll die ;)

Copyright © Saba Khan | Year Posted 2014

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Joseph May Date: 6/10/2014 7:25:00 AM Wonderful write...thanks for stopping by Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 6/11/2014 3:41:00 AM Thank you :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/25/2014 9:22:00 AM Once again, Saba, thank you for the comments on my comments... Linda Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 6/11/2014 3:41:00 AM Thank you :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/24/2014 8:38:00 AM Way to go with this top win..Congrats.Sara Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 5/24/2014 10:31:00 PM Thanks a lot :) :) :)

Living Faith Date: 5/23/2014 9:02:00 PM lovely and exciting in each line ! thanks for your comment on my first poem ! xx Faith Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 5/24/2014 10:30:00 PM My pleasure :) Thank you too :)!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/23/2014 8:58:00 AM By the way, The reason, this poem caught my attention, was the whole, _Be My, I'LL BE YOUR..... hahaha, the every bone was the sweetest and cutest thought. A really good feeling poem. Hugs, and love... Linda Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 5/24/2014 10:30:00 PM Haha..it really makes me smile whenever i'm feeling low :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/22/2014 11:41:00 PM Saba, thank you for the comment on my comment. :) :) :) Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 5/23/2014 12:34:00 AM Thanks for arranging contest :) :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/22/2014 9:41:00 PM Saba Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement.... Stop by my latest blog, "The Glass SLipper" if you'd like. Take Care, and enjoy a smile or two. XOX~ LINDA Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 5/22/2014 11:38:00 PM Thanks a lot :) :) :)

David Williams Date: 5/12/2014 8:57:00 AM Saba an excellent take on modern life's similes ...David Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 5/15/2014 11:33:00 PM Thankssssssssssss :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/12/2014 5:47:00 AM hahaha what a fun way to write.. :D i can feel the rush of excitement in each line except on the third paragraph.. :D it's downwards to lil sadness.. :), GBU, olive Login to Reply Saba Khan Date: 5/15/2014 11:34:00 PM 3rd or 5th? hmm ? ;)