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Unique Way To Propose

Be My Pizza Be My Burger I'll Be your Cold drink! . Be My only! Be my Lonely! Be my only lonely girl! . Without you I'm like sugar-free tea Come to me My Milk Cadbury Add some color as of Red Cherry! . Be my Life Be My Wife Let's cut the cake with knife! . You're my very own! But where've you gone? Remembers you my every bone! . Feeling Shy? You're mine and I'm thy! Come here! or else i'll die ;)

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Joseph May

Date: 6/10/2014 7:25:00 AM

Wonderful write...thanks for stopping by

Saba Khan
Date: 6/11/2014 3:41:00 AM

Thank you :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2014 9:22:00 AM

Once again, Saba, thank you for the comments on my comments... Linda

Saba Khan
Date: 6/11/2014 3:41:00 AM

Thank you :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/24/2014 8:38:00 AM

Way to go with this top win..Congrats.Sara

Saba Khan
Date: 5/24/2014 10:31:00 PM

Thanks a lot :) :) :)

Living Faith

Date: 5/23/2014 9:02:00 PM

lovely and exciting in each line ! thanks for your comment on my first poem ! xx Faith

Saba Khan
Date: 5/24/2014 10:30:00 PM

My pleasure :) Thank you too :)!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/23/2014 8:58:00 AM

By the way, The reason, this poem caught my attention, was the whole, _Be My, I'LL BE YOUR..... hahaha, the every bone was the sweetest and cutest thought. A really good feeling poem. Hugs, and love... Linda

Saba Khan
Date: 5/24/2014 10:30:00 PM

Haha..it really makes me smile whenever i'm feeling low :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2014 11:41:00 PM

Saba, thank you for the comment on my comment. :) :) :)

Saba Khan
Date: 5/23/2014 12:34:00 AM

Thanks for arranging contest :) :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2014 9:41:00 PM

Saba Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement.... Stop by my latest blog, "The Glass SLipper" if you'd like. Take Care, and enjoy a smile or two. XOX~ LINDA

Saba Khan
Date: 5/22/2014 11:38:00 PM

Thanks a lot :) :) :)

David Williams

Date: 5/12/2014 8:57:00 AM

Saba an excellent take on modern life's similes ...David

Saba Khan
Date: 5/15/2014 11:33:00 PM

Thankssssssssssss :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/12/2014 5:47:00 AM

hahaha what a fun way to write.. :D i can feel the rush of excitement in each line except on the third paragraph.. :D it's downwards to lil sadness.. :), GBU, olive

Saba Khan
Date: 5/15/2014 11:34:00 PM

3rd or 5th? hmm ? ;)