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I cannot name one person Who would eat the foods I eat, Plus follow the routines I do To make my day complete. The same way I would not enjoy, Of all my kith and kin, Their daily meals and hobbies, Living in their minds and skin. For even those close confidants To whom we often speak Would balk at certain habits; That’s what makes us each unique. If we could spend a day or two With one friend at a time And do exactly what they do (Including writing rhyme)… We’d understand a little more Or get a better sense Of what their lives are like by seeing All the evidence. But maybe we are better off Allowing the mystique Of others’ worlds to stay unknown, Preventing a critique.

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Date: 3/10/2021 11:25:00 AM
I am totally okay letting them be mysterious, for I certainly do not want all of my secrets unleashed.
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Date: 3/8/2021 12:12:00 PM
The babies start out similar. Put everything in the mouth, etc. still some similarities in early childhood. Thereafter, differentiations continuously get bigger, if that makes sense.
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Date: 3/8/2021 11:24:00 AM
Many children go "yuck" at their parents' favourite food and/or activities, proving we are unique from birth. Another winner, Ilene! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 3/7/2021 7:01:00 PM
That's really good Ilene. This is one of a couple poems recently that you've done on mentioning people have different routines for life and how we should recognize that we are different. I know that it's impossible to walk in some peoples moccasins but I also know that my moccasins are for me. Others should realize there's 9 billion sizes of shoes on this planet. Nice that you make people aware of it. A real strength! I'll look forward to your future thoughts as they are enlightening. Thanks Ilene. Trevor
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Date: 3/7/2021 5:09:00 PM
So true. A little mystery in life can be a good thing. :) gw
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Date: 3/7/2021 4:35:00 PM
Possibly. These are nice quatrains, Ilene, with a real message. I enjoyed reading it a lot.
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