Bl Devnath Poet Rhyme

Union of Disguising Faces

wow! A sweet couple’s vague love of whole night 
                           everything of day time seems to be bright 
                           union of disguising faces falsely improvise 
                           living with blocked hearts tend to demise 

                           lives are in disease of traumatic condition 
                          they show their false sleeping no suspicion
                       even when one snores other lodges no complain 
                         conspiring images of outsiders passes in vein 

                       suddenly wife’s cell rings that’s in vibrating mood
                    awaking from false deep sleep he becomes a tiger rude 
                           sees the number that is of a neighbor’s guy
                      thought got the final result after observing as a spy   

                          as she is caught red handed she's ranted high 
                        once he’s also caught so she tried to give him eye 
                   then he's given thanks to her as she did not spill about him
                      actually they are the same meaning of same synonym

                 
                       For Contest: Desperate Housewife - Poetry Contest
                       Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Richard Lamoureux July 3, 2016 at 8:18 AM Congrats on your win in Linda's contest.;0) Bl Devnath July 3, 2016 at 11:06 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful wishes. Loved always. bl

Sunita U.D Palawon July 3, 2016 at 7:07 AM This is great! Congrats :) Bl Devnath July 3, 2016 at 11:03 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always. bl

Poet Destroyer A July 2, 2016 at 11:50 PM BL, Congratulations on your Desperate House Wife WIN. I thank you for writing for my contest. Stop by my latest blog "UNION OF DISGUISING FACES "HZ1" blog #2." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Bl Devnath July 3, 2016 at 10:24 AM Thanks my lovely *friend for giving my poem in placement. Loved always, bl

Pashang Salehi June 5, 2016 at 6:31 PM Its beautiful BL, or as you always say it is lovely... This poem can be written in a form of Rubai as well, with a little change. wow! A sweet couple’s vague love of whole night, everything of day time seems to be bright. union of disguising faces falsely improvise, living with blocked hearts will be like death and blight. Pashang Salehi June 5, 2016 at 9:47 PM Surely, whatever you do will be great. Bl Devnath June 5, 2016 at 6:43 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Another new poem i will write in the form of Rubai surely. Loved always, bl

Demetrios Trifiatis June 4, 2016 at 3:45 AM Wonderful rhyme depicting a situation that one wouldn't like to be! A seven, my friend BLD! Bl Devnath June 4, 2016 at 9:44 AM Thanks for your inspiring comment my lovely friend. Loved always, bl