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Union and Separation

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separation ache
thousand deaths before union
why suffer this needless pain?

for one to know two
reflections amuse our hearts
lucid dreams seem so real

10-July-2021

Ni (2) Katuata Poetry Contest
Sponsor: William Kekaula

Katuata poem syllable count required : (5-7-7) x 2 verses

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Date: 7/10/2021 7:13:00 AM
Lucid dreams reflect the pain of separation, Very nicely penned
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