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Union

Union, Strong harmony Needing strenuous effort Furthermore bursting our heart Perfect …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/6/2011 4:44:00 PM
Very interesting. Good read.
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Date: 5/6/2011 6:06:00 AM
Desiree excellent poem . Like the way you think. Anne
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Date: 4/20/2011 4:28:00 PM
apparently all is needed to strive to perfection ...... thought inducing poem, Desiree. Thank you for your comment
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Date: 4/20/2011 8:27:00 AM
Maintaining that harmony does require much effort, Desiree. Excellent cinquain! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/20/2011 7:13:00 AM
Very good..!!!
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Date: 4/20/2011 2:42:00 AM
A beautiful write, Desiree ;)
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Date: 4/19/2011 12:37:00 PM
Wonderful images conveying Union
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Date: 4/19/2011 10:00:00 AM
just beautiful, so warm and tender. thank you for commenting on Grandma's Rocking chair.
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