Union

Union,
Strong harmony
Needing strenuous effort
Furthermore bursting our heart
Perfect …
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Eastman Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 4:44 PM
Very interesting. Good read.
Rutherford Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 6:06 AM
Desiree excellent poem . Like the way you think. Anne
Dufresne Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 4:28 PM
apparently all is needed to strive to perfection ...... thought inducing poem, Desiree. Thank you for your comment
Devonshire Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 8:27 AM
Maintaining that harmony does require much effort, Desiree. Excellent cinquain! Love, Carolyn
Squyres Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 7:13 AM
Very good..!!!
Neels Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 2:42 AM
A beautiful write, Desiree ;)
Mehta Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 12:37 PM
Wonderful images conveying Union
Foulk Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 10:00 AM
just beautiful, so warm and tender. thank you for commenting on Grandma's Rocking chair.
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