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Uninvited Guests

my neighbours lose all fear for me;

for afternoon tea and poetry

Note:a pair of busy parent robins perched upon my book & pen inspiring this verse this 
afternoon

on writing and wordscrystalline

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James Marshall Goff

June 10, 2009 at 7:16 PM

poetry, tea and our friends, the birds, wow! Brian! good work! Jim

David Smalling

June 5, 2009 at 7:01 AM

Robins are beautiful birds and I am glad you enjoyed their company, just like I enjoy your great poetry.

L'Nass Shango

June 4, 2009 at 5:35 AM

The dearest friends are those who drop in without invite ... it is matter of pure trust ... that give you to write for them ... well done.

Phyllis Babcock

June 2, 2009 at 12:02 PM

I love the robins who visit me in the back yard while I do the gardening. I always wait for them to come back in the spring. I know spring has truly arrived with their arrival. God Bless Phyl

Carrie Richards

June 2, 2009 at 7:21 AM

Such a delightful poem! On this past Sunday, we took our grandson to a place called "Turtle Bay" (No. Calif.)...it has exhibits of all kinds (we saw Sue,,, a T-Rex dinasour skeleton among other things). One area lets you go into a feeding area for tropical birds...my grandson was delighted to let the birds fly onto his fingers while he fed them with little sticks of peanut butter .Sounds like you do that right at home....perhaps offering tea as well? !! :)

Sharon Winter

June 2, 2009 at 5:45 AM

What? Do you live in a cartoon? I am seriously jealous. If you knew how often I try to get close to birds and even squirrels in my backyard, well constantly and here they come right up to you! How unbelievable! I guess they know good company when they see it. Love this Brian. Love, Shar