Uninspired

Languid notions Curse my head The cursor on My screen blinks_

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Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/18/2010 1:44:00 AM

Not so uninspired after all ;) A great little write, and yes that blinking cursor can be an annoying little soul sometimes! Thanks for your comments on 'A Blue Rose Sings' - it was my first Italian sonnet, though I have written a few English sonnets before. Enjoy your day, hope it's inspired ~ Sharon :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/17/2010 12:34:00 AM

Looks like we all go through this sometime or another.. Think it is my time now, enjoyed this David :) rgds WN PS: thank you for your comment on Altering Elements..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2010 6:34:00 PM

Watching that cursor blink can have something of a hypnotic effect, David. That's one reason I usually write my poems first in longhand. Staring at a screen does not provide as much inspiration as writing outdoors surrounded by nature's beauty. Thanks for sharing. Love, Carolyn

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 6/15/2010 8:08:00 PM

Yeah I've been doing that recently too. Thanks for your comments on "By the Light of the Moon", the best compliment I could have had. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 9:27:00 PM

Go do a footle. hahaha

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2010 9:26:00 PM

Nice one on being uninspired, it's tough sometimes' to keep the motivation going, enjoyed your write,...P.D.