Unimportant

You made me feel
wrong inside
like the last person
in a line
like unimportant
for life
you made me feel
like I had died...

And every time
I make a mistake
i feel so bad
and so ashamed
I see your shadow
walking away
with that cold heart
with that cold face...

Jessica
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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September 23, 2023 at 3:34 AM
A deeply emotive poem.. sounds like a narcissist..
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September 23, 2023 at 6:40 AM
I'm so sorry to hear that
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September 23, 2023 at 4:16 AM
thanks for your comment, it was my mother, not a narcissist in my opinion, but yes a very broken person...I'm dealing with the wounds so they become scars...
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