David Kavanagh Poet Verse

Unicorn

Unbroken unridden 
Unseen unforbidden
Unbridled running free
Unwitnessed through the trees >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Unknown but unto thee
Unequaled in romance 
Unambiguous lance


Pleiades U Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Kim Merryman 
Syllable counter PS 7x6
01/05/2021

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Sara Kendrick May 18, 2021 at 4:43 AM Congrats on this unique and creative winner. Way to go. Sara David Kavanagh May 18, 2021 at 1:55 PM Heya Sara, it was a very enjoyable write bit of a jigsaw, but came together well in the end, thank you for reading, cheers David

Kim Merryman May 4, 2021 at 7:26 PM Nice flow and it rhymes! Congrats on your win, David! Blessings, Kim M David Kavanagh May 4, 2021 at 11:41 PM Thank you Kim, I’m always delighted with any placement, cheers David

Jan Allison May 3, 2021 at 3:31 PM really love this one David and i see you have added a unicorn horn lol:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx David Kavanagh May 3, 2021 at 3:57 PM Thanks Jan, Special effects are not my strongpoint lol, a lame effort for a unicorns horn, it takes me forever to post pictures, but I’m delighted with the poem and placement, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues May 3, 2021 at 12:37 PM Cool, David! It wasn’t until the end where I saw the lance. Congratulations! David Kavanagh May 3, 2021 at 12:42 PM Heya Kim, I put it in for fun, I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

Sotto Poet May 3, 2021 at 10:49 AM Back with my congratulations David, you deserve it with this well-penned Pleiades Regards my friend//Lasaad David Kavanagh May 3, 2021 at 12:31 PM Thanks Lasaad, I’m delighted as always to get a placement, makes it all worthwhile, always appreciate your comments, cheers David

Jenna Logan May 1, 2021 at 9:46 AM No one can claim this in uninspired, David. Good writing. Jenna Logan May 1, 2021 at 9:58 AM You're welcome ;) David Kavanagh May 1, 2021 at 9:54 AM Heya Jenna, thank you with such an inspiring comment, I like your pun, just about managed the final line, cheers David

Jan Allison May 1, 2021 at 9:44 AM WOW what amazing rhyme about this mythical creature. I too had thought of using unicorn but couldnt come up with more than a couple of lines, you have aced it David:-) hugs Jan xx David Kavanagh May 1, 2021 at 9:51 AM Your right Jan It was a struggle, nearly gave up on this one last night, but slept on it, and seemed to come together today, cheers David