Unicorn

Unbroken unridden Unseen unforbidden Unbridled running free Unwitnessed through the trees >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Unknown but unto thee Unequaled in romance Unambiguous lance Pleiades U Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman Syllable counter PS 7x6 01/05/2021

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2021 4:43:00 AM

Congrats on this unique and creative winner. Way to go. Sara

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/18/2021 1:55:00 PM

Heya Sara, it was a very enjoyable write bit of a jigsaw, but came together well in the end, thank you for reading, cheers David

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/4/2021 7:26:00 PM

Nice flow and it rhymes! Congrats on your win, David! Blessings, Kim M

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/4/2021 11:41:00 PM

Thank you Kim, I’m always delighted with any placement, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2021 3:31:00 PM

really love this one David and i see you have added a unicorn horn lol:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/3/2021 3:57:00 PM

Thanks Jan, Special effects are not my strongpoint lol, a lame effort for a unicorns horn, it takes me forever to post pictures, but I’m delighted with the poem and placement, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/3/2021 12:37:00 PM

Cool, David! It wasn’t until the end where I saw the lance. Congratulations!

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/3/2021 12:42:00 PM

Heya Kim, I put it in for fun, I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/3/2021 10:49:00 AM

Back with my congratulations David, you deserve it with this well-penned Pleiades Regards my friend//Lasaad

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/3/2021 12:31:00 PM

Thanks Lasaad, I’m delighted as always to get a placement, makes it all worthwhile, always appreciate your comments, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 5/1/2021 9:46:00 AM

No one can claim this in uninspired, David. Good writing.

Jenna Logan
Date: 5/1/2021 9:58:00 AM

You're welcome ;)

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/1/2021 9:54:00 AM

Heya Jenna, thank you with such an inspiring comment, I like your pun, just about managed the final line, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 5/1/2021 9:44:00 AM

WOW what amazing rhyme about this mythical creature. I too had thought of using unicorn but couldnt come up with more than a couple of lines, you have aced it David:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/1/2021 9:51:00 AM

Your right Jan It was a struggle, nearly gave up on this one last night, but slept on it, and seemed to come together today, cheers David