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Again I see you, again you return to me again you remain, I am unable to move Without reiteration of your presence; you make me aware always, and again Never is never to be.' as all is possible still more than imagination is.' That is reality in its ever change, of opportunity there will be no end. You begin again in renewal, as snowdrops bloom in biting wind cold Old ever the opposite to youth, & that is part of forever without finish Outside is waiting unbelief. & echoing throughout existence willingness New day is sprung of itself, indifferent to broken dreams or the longest nights Lessons are given; forgotten.' again & again; life's spirals weave dream & destiny's

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Date: 2/1/2017 10:42:00 AM
Joe, your writing is a blessing for me. It gives me a chance to read one of the best. For me it has a teaching element. It is what great modern poetry should be. Of course I will add it to my fav list. The only thing that saddens me is the lack of ability for a bunch of us to get together for a coffee or whatever just to talk. Love, love, love this. Thank you!
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Joe Maverick
Date: 2/4/2017 12:48:00 PM
You are too Kind my friend, its good to read and hear from such a quality writer.' As yourself.'
Date: 1/30/2016 2:17:00 PM
Wonderful piece, Joe! Deep write with a powerful message! I love it! Best wishes and a 7! Pandita
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Joe Maverick
Date: 2/4/2017 12:49:00 PM
Hi Pandita, & thank you so much.'
Date: 1/6/2016 11:02:00 AM
love the message here Joe, such inspirational poetry love this..happy new year.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 2/4/2017 12:51:00 PM
Thank you for the comment, its always good to hear from you Harry.'
Date: 1/2/2016 7:33:00 PM
I read just now what you replied to me a while back. Sorry to hear that you were (are?) depressed. I wish you a happy new year that will make you feel uplifted.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/4/2016 1:50:00 AM
Hello Andrea, thank you for your kindness, I was however referring to the economic depression.' which has slowed everything down.'
Date: 1/2/2016 3:17:00 PM
thoughtful & thought-provoking, my friend
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Date: 12/30/2015 12:20:00 PM
Joe, hope to see more of you 2016... Happy New Years... you are always one of my faves Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/27/2015 3:49:00 PM
you light me up, joe... beautiful work!..huggs
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Date: 12/26/2015 9:31:00 PM
Liked the last line a lot! Thanks for the comments on my work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/26/2015 4:45:00 PM
Hi Joe, thank you for replying to my comment on the bottom. How sweet. LINDA
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Date: 12/25/2015 9:48:00 PM
Joe, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/26/2015 8:36:00 AM
Its good of you PD, I hope all stays well on the holidays with you & yours there..'
Date: 12/19/2015 8:03:00 AM
A brilliant piece crafted very beautifully by your words my very dear friend, Joe. I loved it and I immensely enjoyed your precious gem. Thank you so much for sharing and for stopping by on page. I appreciate it soo much. Have a Very Merry Christmas to you and your family. Wishing you all the best this Holiday Season! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/18/2015 10:40:00 PM
Cleverly written Joe. Enjoyed reading. Hope you are well my friend.
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Date: 12/16/2015 2:52:00 PM
Very deep and meaningful poem Joe
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Date: 12/14/2015 12:32:00 PM
Flackmoth has considered running for president but convinced himself he was not corrupt enough to do the job. As for Mr. Trump, if he gets elected, it will only prove how little insight Americans have in judging character. Merci for the stop. Best to you. / M
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Date: 12/12/2015 7:52:00 PM
so , Joe, have you seen either Mick or Levine in concert over there in England?
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/14/2015 12:25:00 PM
hmm I met Ronnie Wood I think it was once upon a time Andrea, I must say I am not getting about much these days. Something to do with the depression I would say..'
Date: 12/8/2015 6:00:00 PM
wow, deep and beautiful. If you shorten this to tanka form, it could fit in that one contest: time is of the essence.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/12/2015 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I more or less gave up on contests a while ago, I am happy entering the odd one now and then.' good of you to mention it though.'
Date: 12/4/2015 5:12:00 PM
What a lovely and enjoyable piece, thanks for sharing..........A.M.
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Date: 11/30/2015 9:14:00 PM
You spin out large spoonful of hope in the fine write! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/29/2015 11:54:00 AM
Hi, Joe. Hope you had a good Thanksgiving. Thanks, old chum, for looking me up. Love, Dave
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Date: 11/27/2015 11:13:00 AM
If I read you correctly, old Joe, yearning never stops, even in old age. It keeps on renewing. This is a jewel. Love, daver
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