Unforgivable

you never listen to what i have to say
           leaving me in the dirt
                      i see right through you 
                                  you nothing but a flirt
                           you broke my heart
                   and left me to parish
                         i miss what we once were
                                but you have broken trust
                         leaving me for dead
              as you come back
                             i can't except
                   your just a broken dream thats hanging onto a string
                                  ready to be snapped
                             and when you fall
                                     ill be there to catch you
                             but i wont be there to love you
                                         your not in my heart anymore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Meyer Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 2:46 PM
Talk about outstanding writing. This poem is really something. Sorry you were hurt so ... And thank you for your comment on my poem "My Resolution ..." Good luck with your work. ~J~
Hallett Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 7:17 AM
very nice. Thank you for your comment lol! it's sad that people have to be heart breakers!!! Love or don't love Courtney!
Brown Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 10:01 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Devon. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 4:05 PM
noooo!! say it aint so. kidding--enjoyed reading today.
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