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Unforgivable

you never listen to what i have to say leaving me in the dirt i see right through you you nothing but a flirt you broke my heart and left me to parish i miss what we once were but you have broken trust leaving me for dead as you come back i can't except your just a broken dream thats hanging onto a string ready to be snapped and when you fall ill be there to catch you but i wont be there to love you your not in my heart anymore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/31/2010 2:46:00 PM
Talk about outstanding writing. This poem is really something. Sorry you were hurt so ... And thank you for your comment on my poem "My Resolution ..." Good luck with your work. ~J~
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Date: 3/31/2010 7:17:00 AM
very nice. Thank you for your comment lol! it's sad that people have to be heart breakers!!! Love or don't love Courtney!
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Date: 3/30/2010 10:01:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Devon. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2010 4:05:00 PM
noooo!! say it aint so. kidding--enjoyed reading today.
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