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Unforgettable Sad Moment In My High School

heart snapped off hearing the news of my friend's unforeseen scarring mishap Disclaimer: This unpredicted incident happened in the year 2009 when I was in 9th grade.My friend Vivek met with frightening tragedy while he was riding bike along with his cousin sitting behind.Unfortunately, his brother died on spot and my friend was mercifully rescued.Attaining deep injuries was in a state of coma. A major shock to his family and us(classmates and teachers).Striken by grief we held him in our faith & prayers every single day for his progress & arrival. In a month or two we heard he was normal but had required rest for few months. We were all excited to meet him once he came back to school though felt bitter looking at his scars everyday. Now he is perfectly all right and blissful young man. Recalling his mishap evokes trembling tears in my eyes even today..!! 9-3-2020 Note:My most unforgettable moment in my High school Poetry Contest. Sponsored by JCB Burl.

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2020 11:12:00 AM

So heart breaking, Deepa, and I've heard this happens a lot with motorbikes. Congratulations on your first place win.

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 7:38:00 AM

It happens with almost all vehicles dear Eve mam..Sometimes it happens coz of one's own fault other times ..It's all fate..!! Thankyou ..for the appreciation:-) Take care.Much love:-)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/9/2020 9:33:00 AM

Very sad. Congrats on your win.

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 7:31:00 AM

Thankyou Richard sir for your visit and appreciation.:-) Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/9/2020 8:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a story/poem. Somethings stay with us forever. Tears are OK. Enjoy your day writing away......................

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 7:30:00 AM

Yes you are right dear Paula mam..Thankyou for the warm words..Enjoy your day.Take care:-)

Carol Mitra

Date: 9/9/2020 3:00:00 AM

Praise God that the story ended well Deepa...Congrats on your win....Take care.

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 7:28:00 AM

Thankyou for the appreciation dear Carol mam:-)Take care.Much love:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2020 2:21:00 AM

- Returns with a happy congratulations, Deepa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :9

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 7:26:00 AM

Thankyou dear Anne mam..for your double visits and appreciations:-)Much love:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2020 2:49:00 PM

what a memory, V. And to think, the other one died from this tragedy. So all his scars went away? What a relief!!

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 7:25:00 AM

Scars remains dear Andrea mam..it's un erasable..!! Death of a loved one is the deepest scar..that creates black hole in life.. Thankyou for glancing at my work. Take care.Much love:-)

Alkas Poetry

Date: 9/4/2020 2:10:00 AM

some incidents mark us for life, especially when they happen with friends ... no one is free of these sad experiences ... emotional story dear poet...Thank you for visiting mu page... salute alkas

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 7:21:00 AM

True words said...!! Thankyou for stopping by and empathizing dear alkas sir.. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/3/2020 1:08:00 PM

Those tragic events in your childhood stay with you forever Deepa, so glad he made a good recovery. Tom

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 7:20:00 AM

Yes..dear Tom sir.. It's a print in heart.Yes he is fine now:-) Take care.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/3/2020 12:22:00 PM

Such tragedy! Some things leave their scars forevermore. Glad your friend is well today.

V. Deepa
Date: 9/14/2020 7:18:00 AM

Yes.You are right dear Kim mam.. It remains forever.. Thankyou..for glancing my work:-)Take care.Much love:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/3/2020 8:31:00 AM

- A really sad memory, Deepa ... hurt to think about - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

V. Deepa
Date: 9/3/2020 9:59:00 AM

Thankyou for the warm words & kind appreciation dear Anne mam..:-)Have a nice day.Much love.Take care.:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/3/2020 5:57:00 AM

Your poem tugs the heart--the incident you described is true to real life--many will relate to. Glad he recovered. All the best, Deepa.

V. Deepa
Date: 9/3/2020 7:34:00 AM

True.I still feel bad about this incident that happened in my friend's life. Yes, Vijay sir he is well now:-) Thankyou so much for glancing at my works.I always value your lovely words.:-)Take care.Warm regards to you.