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Unforgettable

I'm dressed to the nines, do I look fine, Defiantly not demure. I see you on the dance floor a picture glamour, in fact to die for, I'm mesmerised as you dance by, a portrait of lissome grace, just one of your smiles could cure all the worlds wiles, a panacea for the human race. The mellifluous sound in the background makes me want to get on that dance floor As I join the dance floor and for sure Im the cynosure of the rooms attention. I ask to dance, and you say yes ,that's me ineffable for the rest of the night. You're not an ingénue girl, as you send me wild with the moves of a temptress That dance will last in sempiternal, your the prettiest I have ever seen The disco lights reflect of that dress and the sequins shine with a chatoyant lustre Then you turn round, and without a sound you disappear into the night . the story of my life lol

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Date: 5/12/2016 8:44:00 PM
Nicely written and very romantic with excellent use of the words, Stephen. It is amazing to read the different themes those words led to! Sandra
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 5/13/2016 1:21:00 AM
many thanks, silent one set a good challenge some amazing poems thanks for having a read stephen
Date: 5/12/2016 8:35:00 AM
Nicely done flowing well and inspired.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 5/12/2016 8:49:00 AM
many thanks casarah, inspired indeed, :-)

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