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Unforgettable

The time and moments that we both shared, was really great in 
every way.  I often think about it today.  You are so unforgettable
to me, another love will never be.

You helped  to bring out the best in me, I learned to love and to be
my best,  to love you and nothing less.
You are unforgettable in so many ways, I could just love you for days.
The way in which you communicate, brings much love and never hate.

You are unforgettable as can be, your love is deeper than the sea.
It has rythym here and there, your love just flows throughout the air.
You are unforgettable this I will not deny, I think of you and give a sigh
because of all you have done for me, you helped me love and set my
soul free.

Copyright © Shirley Long | Year Posted 2012

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/2/2013 4:13:00 PM Shirley, a beautiful blessings with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent day... I know I sure am. :-) or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA Login to Reply Shirley Long Date: 2/4/2013 11:47:00 AM Thanks for enjoying and reading my poem. It makes me feel better as an individual when I say something or relate a thought or idea to another individual that can help or might encourage then along life journey. Have A great day!

Chuck Novotny Date: 3/30/2012 11:21:00 PM A number of things jump out at me here. First, and foremost, you have some things that need to be heard and you say them well. Second, perhaps more attention to rythm and line breaks will clarify your work, taking it to the edge of brilliance. I hope you are not offended by that thought, but I would despair of thinking that these thoughts might go unheard. And, I enjoy it! - Chuck Login to Reply Shirley Long Date: 2/4/2013 11:45:00 AM Thanks Chuck, I appreciate you reading my poem and giving me helpful suggestions that will make my work even better. Have a great day!