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Unforgettable

her intoxicating perfume lingering like a bluesy melody ~ Submitted on March 28, 2020 for contest THE LADY DOWN THE LANE sponsored by CRAIG CORNISH - RANKED 8TH Originally posted on March 19, 2020

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/8/2020 9:51:00 PM

Beautiful piece, congratulations on your win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/9/2020 12:13:00 AM

Thanks, much appreciated.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2020 10:44:00 AM

Two lines of beauty, Line. A delight to read! Belated congratulations on p.o.t.d. ~ Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2020 1:15:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. Most appreciated.

Jc Hawkens

Date: 3/30/2020 1:12:00 PM

What a delight. Fantastic imagery and a bit of a time machine. Certainly feel transported. Beautiful poem Line. Congratulations on POTD JC Hawkens

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/31/2020 12:58:00 AM

Thank you so much. Most appreciated, JC.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/30/2020 12:01:00 AM

Your few words capture the spirit well Line. Back to congratulate you on your win with this gem! xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/31/2020 12:58:00 AM

Thank you very much, Connie.

John Watt

Date: 3/25/2020 11:14:00 PM

I'm humming "Summertime" now, by the Gershwins. That unforgettable bluesy melody of which you write. Mmm, mmm.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/26/2020 4:13:00 PM

Thanks. That's lovely, John.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 3/24/2020 5:32:00 PM

Absolutely my favorite FAV from you. Love the imagery and how it sucked me in instantly. So few words so powerful. I felt like I was hearing the 1812 Overture after I read it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2020 6:23:00 PM

Thank you so much, Timothy. You are such a romantic. LOL

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/23/2020 11:43:00 AM

Missed this magnificent POTD. However, belated Kudos... Panagiota xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2020 6:24:00 PM

Thank you so much, Panagiota. Most appreciated.

Mark Koplin

Date: 3/22/2020 5:44:00 AM

I like your work here my friend. Great poem and well deserved POTD

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2020 8:46:00 AM

Thank you, Mark. Most appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/22/2020 3:21:00 AM

oh so beautiful Line congrats on POTD:-) hugs jJan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2020 8:46:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jan.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/22/2020 2:27:00 AM

Tom, back with congratulations on your POTD - well deserved my friend. Stay well!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2020 8:46:00 AM

Thanks, Sam. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/21/2020 11:19:00 PM

Shades of the great old movies. Felt this one immediately. Great! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2020 1:04:00 AM

Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/21/2020 8:17:00 PM

I like this, and it does say soooo much. Beautiful and Unforgettable, are your words my dear friend. Congratulations Line, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2020 1:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, Brandy. Most appreciated.

Wren Rushing

Date: 3/21/2020 7:23:00 PM

Congratulations Line on POTD! Much deserved! Have a wonderful weekend!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 7:50:00 PM

Thanks, Wren. Much appreciated.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/21/2020 2:48:00 PM

Congratulations Line on your POTD. Entranced by the "bluesy melody!"

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sam.

Sandra Adams

Date: 3/21/2020 1:38:00 PM

back to say congratulations on your POTD Line :) hugs

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:53:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.

John Lawless

Date: 3/21/2020 1:17:00 PM

I'm hoping this is entered in the lady down the lane contest, beautifully done Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:53:00 PM

You think?

P.S. Awtry

Date: 3/21/2020 12:52:00 PM

Love it! Congratulations!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:54:00 PM

Thank you PS.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/21/2020 12:23:00 PM

Beautiful lady! Like yourself. Congratulations on poem of the day!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:54:00 PM

What a lovely thing to say, Eve. Thank you so much.

Mark Toney

Date: 3/21/2020 12:05:00 PM

A perfect example of ‘less is more.’ Awesome, Line! Congratulation on Poem of the Day. ~Mark

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mark.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 3/21/2020 9:49:00 AM

Sweet laconic poem as unforgettable as a charming fragrance and an entrancing music! Congratulations Line, on your POTD honour! Well earned! Stay safe. Regards and blessings.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:55:00 PM

Thank you so much, Besma. Most appreciated.