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her intoxicating perfume lingering like a bluesy melody ~ Submitted on March 28, 2020 for contest THE LADY DOWN THE LANE sponsored by CRAIG CORNISH - RANKED 8TH Originally posted on March 19, 2020

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Date: 4/8/2020 9:51:00 PM
Beautiful piece, congratulations on your win.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/9/2020 12:13:00 AM
Thanks, much appreciated.
Date: 4/7/2020 10:44:00 AM
Two lines of beauty, Line. A delight to read! Belated congratulations on p.o.t.d. ~ Regards // paul
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2020 1:15:00 PM
Thanks, Paul. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/30/2020 1:12:00 PM
What a delight. Fantastic imagery and a bit of a time machine. Certainly feel transported. Beautiful poem Line. Congratulations on POTD JC Hawkens
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/31/2020 12:58:00 AM
Thank you so much. Most appreciated, JC.
Date: 3/30/2020 12:01:00 AM
Your few words capture the spirit well Line. Back to congratulate you on your win with this gem! xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/31/2020 12:58:00 AM
Thank you very much, Connie.
Date: 3/25/2020 11:14:00 PM
I'm humming "Summertime" now, by the Gershwins. That unforgettable bluesy melody of which you write. Mmm, mmm.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/26/2020 4:13:00 PM
Thanks. That's lovely, John.
Date: 3/24/2020 5:32:00 PM
Absolutely my favorite FAV from you. Love the imagery and how it sucked me in instantly. So few words so powerful. I felt like I was hearing the 1812 Overture after I read it.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2020 6:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Timothy. You are such a romantic. LOL
Date: 3/23/2020 11:43:00 AM
Missed this magnificent POTD. However, belated Kudos... Panagiota xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2020 6:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Panagiota. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/22/2020 5:44:00 AM
I like your work here my friend. Great poem and well deserved POTD
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2020 8:46:00 AM
Thank you, Mark. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/22/2020 3:21:00 AM
oh so beautiful Line congrats on POTD:-) hugs jJan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2020 8:46:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jan.
Date: 3/22/2020 2:27:00 AM
Tom, back with congratulations on your POTD - well deserved my friend. Stay well!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2020 8:46:00 AM
Thanks, Sam. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/21/2020 11:19:00 PM
Shades of the great old movies. Felt this one immediately. Great! :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2020 1:04:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/21/2020 8:17:00 PM
I like this, and it does say soooo much. Beautiful and Unforgettable, are your words my dear friend. Congratulations Line, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2020 1:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, Brandy. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/21/2020 7:23:00 PM
Congratulations Line on POTD! Much deserved! Have a wonderful weekend!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 7:50:00 PM
Thanks, Wren. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/21/2020 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations Line on your POTD. Entranced by the "bluesy melody!"
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam.
Date: 3/21/2020 1:38:00 PM
back to say congratulations on your POTD Line :) hugs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:53:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/21/2020 1:17:00 PM
I'm hoping this is entered in the lady down the lane contest, beautifully done Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:53:00 PM
You think?
Date: 3/21/2020 12:52:00 PM
Love it! Congratulations!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:54:00 PM
Thank you PS.
Date: 3/21/2020 12:23:00 PM
Beautiful lady! Like yourself. Congratulations on poem of the day!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:54:00 PM
What a lovely thing to say, Eve. Thank you so much.
Date: 3/21/2020 12:05:00 PM
A perfect example of ‘less is more.’ Awesome, Line! Congratulation on Poem of the Day. ~Mark
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mark.
Date: 3/21/2020 9:49:00 AM
Sweet laconic poem as unforgettable as a charming fragrance and an entrancing music! Congratulations Line, on your POTD honour! Well earned! Stay safe. Regards and blessings.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/21/2020 2:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Besma. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/21/2020 9:45:00 AM
Line , great last lime. So descriptive. Congratulations on POTD, Warm Wishes~ Warren
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Date: 3/21/2020 8:07:00 AM
Lovely the tangle of perfume and music! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 3/21/2020 7:57:00 AM
Splendid penning Line! That second line is luscious. Congratulations on POTD! xomo
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Date: 3/21/2020 7:11:00 AM
Love the short poems Line and this is a good one. So deserving of POTD. Congrats!
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Date: 3/21/2020 7:01:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Line..
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