Line Gauthier Poet Monoku

Unforgettable

her intoxicating perfume lingering like a bluesy melody ~



AP: Honorable Mention 2026

Submitted on March 28, 2020 for  contest THE LADY DOWN THE LANE sponsored by CRAIG CORNISH  -  RANKED 8TH

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M. L. Kiser April 8, 2020 at 9:51 PM Beautiful piece, congratulations on your win. Line Gauthier April 9, 2020 at 12:13 AM Thanks, much appreciated.

Paul Callus April 7, 2020 at 10:44 AM Two lines of beauty, Line. A delight to read! Belated congratulations on p.o.t.d. ~ Regards // paul Line Gauthier April 7, 2020 at 1:15 PM Thanks, Paul. Most appreciated.

Jc Hawkens March 30, 2020 at 1:12 PM What a delight. Fantastic imagery and a bit of a time machine. Certainly feel transported. Beautiful poem Line. Congratulations on POTD JC Hawkens Line Gauthier March 31, 2020 at 12:58 AM Thank you so much. Most appreciated, JC.

Connie Marcum Wong March 30, 2020 at 12:01 AM Your few words capture the spirit well Line. Back to congratulate you on your win with this gem! xxoo Line Gauthier March 31, 2020 at 12:58 AM Thank you very much, Connie.

John Watt March 25, 2020 at 11:14 PM I'm humming "Summertime" now, by the Gershwins. That unforgettable bluesy melody of which you write. Mmm, mmm. Line Gauthier March 26, 2020 at 4:13 PM Thanks. That's lovely, John.

Timothy Mcguire March 24, 2020 at 5:32 PM Absolutely my favorite FAV from you. Love the imagery and how it sucked me in instantly. So few words so powerful. I felt like I was hearing the 1812 Overture after I read it. Line Gauthier March 24, 2020 at 6:23 PM Thank you so much, Timothy. You are such a romantic. LOL

Panagiota Romios March 23, 2020 at 11:43 AM Missed this magnificent POTD. However, belated Kudos... Panagiota xx Line Gauthier March 24, 2020 at 6:24 PM Thank you so much, Panagiota. Most appreciated.

Mark Koplin March 22, 2020 at 5:44 AM I like your work here my friend. Great poem and well deserved POTD Line Gauthier March 22, 2020 at 8:46 AM Thank you, Mark. Most appreciated.

Jan Allison March 22, 2020 at 3:21 AM oh so beautiful Line congrats on POTD:-) hugs jJan xx Line Gauthier March 22, 2020 at 8:46 AM Thank you very much, Jan.

Sam Kauffman March 22, 2020 at 2:27 AM Tom, back with congratulations on your POTD - well deserved my friend. Stay well! Line Gauthier March 22, 2020 at 8:46 AM Thanks, Sam. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf March 21, 2020 at 11:19 PM Shades of the great old movies. Felt this one immediately. Great! :) gw Line Gauthier March 22, 2020 at 1:04 AM Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Brandy Nicole March 21, 2020 at 8:17 PM I like this, and it does say soooo much. Beautiful and Unforgettable, are your words my dear friend. Congratulations Line, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Line Gauthier March 22, 2020 at 1:04 AM Thank you so much, Brandy. Most appreciated.

Wren Rushing March 21, 2020 at 7:23 PM Congratulations Line on POTD! Much deserved! Have a wonderful weekend! Line Gauthier March 21, 2020 at 7:50 PM Thanks, Wren. Much appreciated.

Sam Kauffman March 21, 2020 at 2:48 PM Congratulations Line on your POTD. Entranced by the "bluesy melody!" Line Gauthier March 21, 2020 at 2:53 PM Thank you so much, Sam.

Sandra Adams March 21, 2020 at 1:38 PM back to say congratulations on your POTD Line :) hugs Line Gauthier March 21, 2020 at 2:53 PM Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.

John Lawless March 21, 2020 at 1:17 PM I'm hoping this is entered in the lady down the lane contest, beautifully done Line Line Gauthier March 21, 2020 at 2:53 PM You think?

P.S. Awtry March 21, 2020 at 12:52 PM Love it! Congratulations! Line Gauthier March 21, 2020 at 2:54 PM Thank you PS.

Eve Roper March 21, 2020 at 12:23 PM Beautiful lady! Like yourself. Congratulations on poem of the day! Line Gauthier March 21, 2020 at 2:54 PM What a lovely thing to say, Eve. Thank you so much.

Mark Toney March 21, 2020 at 12:05 PM A perfect example of ‘less is more.’ Awesome, Line! Congratulation on Poem of the Day. ~Mark Line Gauthier March 21, 2020 at 2:54 PM Thank you so much, Mark.

Besma Riabi Dziri March 21, 2020 at 9:49 AM Sweet laconic poem as unforgettable as a charming fragrance and an entrancing music! Congratulations Line, on your POTD honour! Well earned! Stay safe. Regards and blessings. Line Gauthier March 21, 2020 at 2:55 PM Thank you so much, Besma. Most appreciated.

Warren Doll March 21, 2020 at 9:45 AM Line , great last lime. So descriptive. Congratulations on POTD, Warm Wishes~ Warren

Kim Rodrigues March 21, 2020 at 8:07 AM Lovely the tangle of perfume and music! Congrats on POTD!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 21, 2020 at 7:57 AM Splendid penning Line! That second line is luscious. Congratulations on POTD! xomo

Charlie Knowlton March 21, 2020 at 7:11 AM Love the short poems Line and this is a good one. So deserving of POTD. Congrats!

Joseph May March 21, 2020 at 7:01 AM Congrats on POTD Line..

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