Unforeseen

Shaken, angry  and scared is the family that was once three

Each parent accusing the other of murder in the second degree

But just who would set the fire while their only child was inside

Their faces register horror, realizing someone could have died



Watching them from the observation room I'm increasingly intrigued

The yelling finally ceasing as they become understandably fatigued 

A troubled marriage led them to live in separate houses for almost a year

The husband citing lack of 'love' and wife stating he drank too much beer



Fire broke out in the mother's house after dad left after visiting son

Family room in flames, out the door mom and boy had to quickly run

Fire department said fire was set deliberately with a bic lighter

Luckily no one was hurt and fire quickly extinguished by a fire fighter



Their son sits alone across the room, withdrawn and very stressed

Each time his parents bicker, he becomes a little more distressed

Drawing pictures on paper of his family smiling in happier times

Of them in house on a hill, hanging from the porch, musical chimes 



The house he draws is where he lived up until almost a year ago

His mother moved out the family home with her 8 year old son in tow

It becomes obvious to me that it's the boy who has set the fire

So his family can live in one house, to rewind time is his desire



I enter the interrogation room and say to the boy, "I understand"

"Sometimes things don't always work out the way we have planned"

He whispers, " I'm sorry", as guilty tears of relief roll down his face

The sergeant states, 'case closed', as mom and dad their son embrace





Sponsor ~ Vicky Tsiluma 

Contest Name ~ Profiling 101
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Oule Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 9:54 AM
Long i read a poem from your side, Well crafted this poem #8ryan LOVED READING IT Well painted and the end is epic, Hope you're okay Hugs
Melugin Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 10:37 AM
I love it! Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 7:20 PM
you really deserved this top win. Congrats, sweetie.
Kostman Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 3:10 PM
Congrats's on your well deserved win! Hugs!
A   Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 11:00 AM
a clever #1..love it Cecilia, xox~ LINDA
A  Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 9:18 PM
Cecilia,, CONGRATS ;) on your win... love ~SKAT~
Anglesey Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 7:11 PM
Well done. congrats on the win :)
Ligon Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 7:04 PM
This is awesome! Congrats, Cecilia!
May Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 5:54 PM
great story Cecillia....congrats on your win
Guzzi Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 4:51 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Bantawa Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 4:28 PM
lovely,congrats!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 9:27 AM
Congratulations Cecilia, a worthy winner xx
Lamoureux Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 8:41 AM
Well done Cecilia
Mehta Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 3:53 AM
Congrats on the win , Cecilia
Horne Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 10:01 AM
awesome write, my friend - so glad to see it was a winner
Hendricks Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 11:42 PM
WOW - and another WOW. You sure put a lot of effort into this. Soooo enjoyed reading. Off to faves, my talented friend. Licia :-)
Dey Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 1:24 PM
Your work is smooth and straight...Their faces register horror,,,liked your way of express their faces.Best luck
Posey Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 10:55 AM
Worthy of a run on HLN... You have magnificently chronicled an adventure worth experiencing. Happy endings sometimes are worth the journey.... You can be very proud of this one.... Congratulations.... Jake
Jones Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 8:34 PM
Cecilia..this is an outstanding write..I enjoyed the moral message behind it....congratulations
Kendrick Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 7:34 AM
Great work that you have penned..Reads like a winner to me..I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
J.T. Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 12:43 AM
Nicely done. I love the way this is written. Good job and congratulations.
Cavanaugh Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 11:35 PM
This is an amazing piece. Congratulations.
Ellison Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 4:59 PM
This is a brilliant and engaging write! The ending was worth the ride through troubled times! A very deep and touching write my dear Cecilla... congratulations! xoxoxox
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 4:00 PM
Hey, what a cool way to do the contest. I had no clue about this one and I really admire your approach.
Tacito Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 3:24 PM
Astounding setting, really impacting the intentions of those involved in this story. So much depth! Wonderful job!
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