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Shaken, angry and scared is the family that was once three Each parent accusing the other of murder in the second degree But just who would set the fire while their only child was inside Their faces register horror, realizing someone could have died Watching them from the observation room I'm increasingly intrigued The yelling finally ceasing as they become understandably fatigued A troubled marriage led them to live in separate houses for almost a year The husband citing lack of 'love' and wife stating he drank too much beer Fire broke out in the mother's house after dad left after visiting son Family room in flames, out the door mom and boy had to quickly run Fire department said fire was set deliberately with a bic lighter Luckily no one was hurt and fire quickly extinguished by a fire fighter Their son sits alone across the room, withdrawn and very stressed Each time his parents bicker, he becomes a little more distressed Drawing pictures on paper of his family smiling in happier times Of them in house on a hill, hanging from the porch, musical chimes The house he draws is where he lived up until almost a year ago His mother moved out the family home with her 8 year old son in tow It becomes obvious to me that it's the boy who has set the fire So his family can live in one house, to rewind time is his desire I enter the interrogation room and say to the boy, "I understand" "Sometimes things don't always work out the way we have planned" He whispers, " I'm sorry", as guilty tears of relief roll down his face The sergeant states, 'case closed', as mom and dad their son embrace Sponsor ~ Vicky Tsiluma Contest Name ~ Profiling 101

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/19/2015 9:54:00 AM
Long i read a poem from your side, Well crafted this poem #8ryan LOVED READING IT Well painted and the end is epic, Hope you're okay Hugs
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Date: 11/24/2013 10:37:00 AM
I love it! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:20:00 PM
you really deserved this top win. Congrats, sweetie.
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Date: 11/9/2013 3:10:00 PM
Congrats's on your well deserved win! Hugs!
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Date: 11/9/2013 11:00:00 AM
a clever #1..love it Cecilia, xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/8/2013 9:18:00 PM
Cecilia,, CONGRATS ;) on your win... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/8/2013 7:11:00 PM
Well done. congrats on the win :)
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Date: 11/8/2013 7:04:00 PM
This is awesome! Congrats, Cecilia!
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Date: 11/8/2013 5:54:00 PM
great story Cecillia....congrats on your win
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Date: 11/8/2013 4:51:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/8/2013 4:28:00 PM
lovely,congrats!
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Date: 11/8/2013 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations Cecilia, a worthy winner xx
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Date: 11/8/2013 8:41:00 AM
Well done Cecilia
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Date: 11/8/2013 3:53:00 AM
Congrats on the win , Cecilia
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Date: 11/3/2013 10:01:00 AM
awesome write, my friend - so glad to see it was a winner
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Date: 11/2/2013 11:42:00 PM
WOW - and another WOW. You sure put a lot of effort into this. Soooo enjoyed reading. Off to faves, my talented friend. Licia :-)
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Date: 11/2/2013 1:24:00 PM
Your work is smooth and straight...Their faces register horror,,,liked your way of express their faces.Best luck
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Date: 11/1/2013 10:55:00 AM
Worthy of a run on HLN... You have magnificently chronicled an adventure worth experiencing. Happy endings sometimes are worth the journey.... You can be very proud of this one.... Congratulations.... Jake
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Date: 10/31/2013 8:34:00 PM
Cecilia..this is an outstanding write..I enjoyed the moral message behind it....congratulations
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Date: 10/31/2013 7:34:00 AM
Great work that you have penned..Reads like a winner to me..I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/31/2013 12:43:00 AM
Nicely done. I love the way this is written. Good job and congratulations.
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Date: 10/30/2013 11:35:00 PM
This is an amazing piece. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/30/2013 4:59:00 PM
This is a brilliant and engaging write! The ending was worth the ride through troubled times! A very deep and touching write my dear Cecilla... congratulations! xoxoxox
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Date: 10/28/2013 4:00:00 PM
Hey, what a cool way to do the contest. I had no clue about this one and I really admire your approach.
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Date: 10/28/2013 3:24:00 PM
Astounding setting, really impacting the intentions of those involved in this story. So much depth! Wonderful job!
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