Unforced Error

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Unforced error, due to stupor Tamas Guna holds sway Be a winner, not a loser The divine entwined way Love suffused awareness One with the That oneness Dispels stuporousness Ego tremor Unforced error 09-November-2021 Quietus

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/9/2021 8:02:00 AM

earth winners and soul winners are two different winners "Be a winner, not a loser The divine entwined way" - nice one.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/9/2021 8:45:00 AM

Thank you, Caren!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2021 5:21:00 AM

Blessed sleep is a blessing from God. We can unloaded all we can't understand in our dreams and come out refreshed. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/9/2021 8:44:00 AM

The trick to real awakening, as scriptures affirm, is to maintain equanimous unbroken awareness through waking, dreaming and deep sleep … basically, Turiya. Very few have accomplished this level of consciousness but it seems that it is doable, with grace of course

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/9/2021 1:08:00 AM

Splendid quietus.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/9/2021 8:41:00 AM

Thank you, Victor! You enjoyed, mission accomplished! :)