Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Unforced Error

Unforced error, due to stupor
Tamas Guna holds sway
Be a winner, not a loser
The divine entwined way

Love suffused awareness 
One with the That oneness
Dispels stuporousness 

Ego tremor
Unforced error

09-November-2021
Quietus 

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Caren Krutsinger November 9, 2021 at 8:02 AM earth winners and soul winners are two different winners "Be a winner, not a loser The divine entwined way" - nice one. Unseeking Seeker November 9, 2021 at 8:45 AM Thank you, Caren!

Sara Kendrick November 9, 2021 at 5:21 AM Blessed sleep is a blessing from God. We can unloaded all we can't understand in our dreams and come out refreshed. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara Unseeking Seeker November 9, 2021 at 8:44 AM The trick to real awakening, as scriptures affirm, is to maintain equanimous unbroken awareness through waking, dreaming and deep sleep … basically, Turiya. Very few have accomplished this level of consciousness but it seems that it is doable, with grace of course

Victor Buhagiar November 9, 2021 at 1:08 AM Splendid quietus. Unseeking Seeker November 9, 2021 at 8:41 AM Thank you, Victor! You enjoyed, mission accomplished! :)