Unfit

Although I did my bit,I feel more like a misfit;
They said that I was clever,I've lived life like a dimwit.
                                                              --- Princefreakasso
                                                                  (Artist and Poet)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Duncan Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 4:53 PM
Being so talented and bright, you are living a great life with your talent and art.
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December 1, 2009 at 10:02 PM
A clever dimwit, hey ;) Interesting. But I do think we all do at times feel unfit. Well written couplet though. I think you are having fun writing opposing thoughts within lines of poetry. And so you should. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your review of my poem and for your clarifying comments, made me smile. Caroline.
Dufresne Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 7:56 AM
We must be brothers!
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December 1, 2009 at 6:02 AM
I doubt this is true but your couplet is a wonderful write, Princefreakasso and I enjoyed ... thankxxx for commenting so complimentary on my Invaders... see James Fraser's poem Undesirables and it will give u insight as to the perpetrators who are trying to infiltrate this website with garbage poetry... blessings ... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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