Unfinished Work

Few gray clouds sprinkle the horizon
Cobalt blue streaks with magenta
Drawing me into the peace and serenity
Only God can bestow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kurth Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Sara, lovely imagery - took me to memories of moments just like this! Thanks for the mini vacation into serenity land. Krista
Burton Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 4:22 PM
That was relaxing... loved the end and enjoy your day.
Goff Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 4:09 PM
I'm always searchin! only battin' 'bout 222! great verse! Sara! and thanks for comments!
Rider Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 1:35 PM
and only God CAN grant serenity that profound...well done. And thank you for your comments on my shape poem also! ~*~Trudy~*~
Anish Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 12:51 PM
We are all seeking that "peace and serenity" - Well put. Thanks Matthew Anish
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