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Unfinished Work

Few gray clouds sprinkle the horizon Cobalt blue streaks with magenta Drawing me into the peace and serenity Only God can bestow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/3/2009 12:30:00 PM
Sara, lovely imagery - took me to memories of moments just like this! Thanks for the mini vacation into serenity land. Krista
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Date: 7/31/2009 4:22:00 PM
That was relaxing... loved the end and enjoy your day.
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Date: 7/31/2009 4:09:00 PM
I'm always searchin! only battin' 'bout 222! great verse! Sara! and thanks for comments!
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Date: 7/31/2009 1:35:00 PM
and only God CAN grant serenity that profound...well done. And thank you for your comments on my shape poem also! ~*~Trudy~*~
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Date: 7/31/2009 12:51:00 PM
We are all seeking that "peace and serenity" - Well put. Thanks Matthew Anish
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