Unfinished

The bleedings back, it scares me and makes me shake in fear,
I cry a lot, both from the fright and the pain that riddels throughout my body,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 9, 2010 at 9:58 AM
The imagery in this poem is one that is not pleasant. Hopefully, joy will come with the sunrise. Great job! Joseph
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