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Unfiled Thoughts

Rummaging thru a shoe box filled with paper, each page a note of thoughts and feelings all jumbled together. I pick thru them looking for one good feeling, one ray of hope, but thoughts are in bold blood red letters triggering a cascade of feelings of dread and dispare, so many negatives so few positives. I begin to feel hollowed out this is to much of a task to file each one away, unable to get away from the terror of myself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/17/2009 3:47:00 PM
Interesting comparisons used in this write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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