L Milton Hankins Poet Rhyme

Unfathomable Space

The sky is bluer than my true love’s eyes
Deeper than the ocean’s mysteries --
Blotting out the stars that twinkle at night,
Fuels all my most elaborate fantasies.
What lies within the unfathomable space?
Could it be interminable infinities? --
Perhaps, lying beyond eons of darkness
The abode of my imagined divinities.
Ah, the depths of my true love’s thoughts
If I had millions of years to fondly explore
And could know the hidden truths therein,
I should not be satisfied, only wanting more.

written March 5, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger March 6, 2022 at 11:50 PM I have painted a girl in your painting with the BLUEST eyes imaginable, hoping that Deb had blue eyes! Wow! God is great! L Milton Hankins March 7, 2022 at 9:00 AM Yes. Deb was a blue-eyed blond, but in later years she dyed her hair red because she always wanted to be a redhead. So, I told her go for it. She was so happy with her red hair.

Gershon Wolf March 6, 2022 at 7:11 PM The $64 Gazillion dollar question: Who is the 'true love' in this rapturous poem? ~ Universal Studios L Milton Hankins March 6, 2022 at 9:50 PM Thanks, gw. You got it. That's the $64 Gazillion dollar question. One person noted I didn't use "deities," but rather "divinities." This may be the most thought-provoking poem I've ever written. Wasn't that the show that was proven fraudulent?

Marco Chies March 5, 2022 at 5:31 PM small masterpiece of intimate lyricism, I loved the text! L Milton Hankins March 5, 2022 at 7:13 PM Thanks so much, Marco. Another reader made me think that I probably ventured too far afield. Who knows?