Unfathomable

As the sun makes its descent down the ocean line,

The sky turns peach,

And the sweetness of your smell makes me flutter towards you like a bee,

As I drift among the white sand,

The ocean waves reach for you,

And try to take you away,

The crustaceans shine their best for you,

And the sea stars light your ground,

As the stars begin to sparkle in the sky,

An unfathomable beauty unfolds,

And all I can offer you is a place beneath my wing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 19, 2026 at 6:30 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 12, 2016 at 10:22 AM
George Andrade, awesome poem.. Love LINDA
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July 21, 2015 at 4:30 PM
GEORGE, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"
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