Unfaithful

Unfaithful do love n hate seperate, by the thin ness of a rhyme, love is hate upon your plate, same passion, hurting time... (thanks Russell Sivey) women say they want a guy, who is ever faithful, true, magnetizing flame burns is why, the moths are drawn to you, mans ego aint sublime, moths come, attractive too, a stronger man, may dodge this time, but weakness confounds you, and so begins the crime… too true:( Don Johnson
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Duncan Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 5:09 PM
nicely done ;}
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November 4, 2012 at 2:47 PM
(Another) nice one, Don... emotions are so intricate... beyond the realm of reason... I enjoyed... Terry
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November 4, 2012 at 8:47 AM
This crime can be so detrimental and painful my friend! I really believe that having a tender heart is not a weakness! This poem is amazing Don, what a pleasant sight it is! I really enjoyed reading this incredible and wondrous poem this afternoon! What powerful words you have brought for us to read! What a striking piece, Great Work!!
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November 4, 2012 at 2:31 AM
Your poem rings ever true. Thank you for sharing with us. I appreciated reading tonight. Always, Laura
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November 4, 2012 at 12:58 AM
Interesting poem Don. Far too often true....unfortunately.
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