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Unexpected She Seemed!!!

The sun rose and the birds chirped in an unusual way, But no one knew what they did say; A busy day it would have been, Disquieting, lo... The future scene; Unexpected seemed the roaring waves, Rushing in and out the sandy paves; Death appeared a second near, What else would we humans fear?! Oh how loudly their innocence wept, Whilst all along the earth she crept. The emphatic mother…she opened her mouth wide, To call her children by her wavy side… She forced her way into the land, Sweeping hundreds of lives off the sand; Cries involved the scary dawn, Death assured a life time gone; She made me think, she made me fret, Life was now but a defensive threat. A mother she was to all around, Her children unaware of the loss abound; Though Water here never saved their lives, The sovereign goddess of “love” survives; Divinity here, she dint let die, But greeted her beloveds…with all, but a dreadful cry!!!

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Date: 8/7/2011 12:11:00 PM
Many congratulations Sudharshni on making it to first round of winners in Poetrysoup contest. Winning wishes for the final round. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Sudharshini. Love, Carol
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Sudharshini Vijay
Date: 8/4/2011 12:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Carol,your words are what keeps me going...i sure will write a million more poems when people like you are around!!!
Date: 8/2/2011 1:48:00 PM
I guess you were trying to depict the tsunami. Well done.
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Sudharshini Vijay
Date: 8/4/2011 12:51:00 PM
Yeah very true,'twas about the tsunami;what else could be so dreadful and unpredictable! Thanks a lot Ether!!!
Date: 9/18/2010 1:22:00 PM
nice one, enjoyed the read..P.D.
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Sudharshini Vijay
Date: 8/4/2011 12:51:00 PM
Thank you so much...:)

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