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My watch is broken, I can not wait for you to get here The sun is heating,(I cannot believe) today, we're finally meeting. I'm not quite sure how I'm gonna act or what I'm gonna say But of one thing I'm sure, when you'll be in front of me, you'll take my breath away. While I'm waiting, my mind is flying away From the moment you'll get here, to the first move you'll make. I just wish, this day to be perfect I hope I'm ready for any unexpected events. It's getting late and you're nowhere to be found I'm getting all kinds of emotions, but is nothing I can do about.. The park is empty, looks like the rain is gonna arrive I guess I should be going too, nothing makes me stay around. Maybe you got stuck in traffic or you've just changed your mind, Either way, I better go now, maybe we'll get to meet some other time.. And now my battery is dying, I have such a lucky day, I don't think this day could get any better, >>no 'eff!n' way!!<< Where should I go now? to the hotel or to a pub? I'll get me something to drink before Imma call it a nite. I don't find my card key, guess I'm losing my mind.. Huh?! Who the 'eff' are you 'my friend'? Why do you have to honk so loud? you: Hey!!! me: Gosh, you scared me! you: Where are you going? don't we have a date? me: Hey, you're the one that got here late. you: Yeah, I'm sorry. look, I've been running all the way... me: Cool. I'm glad you came. I'm starving. where you gonna take me? you: well, since our picnic is ruined, thanks to the coming rain.. lemme take you to my favorite restaurant.. me: sounds great. OK. While in the car, you've turned on the radio And the silliest song was playing in the air Smiling, you looked at me and started dancing Gosh, you're amazing. (that's what I said) We've got to the restaurant It's getting pretty hot No sign of the rain now Guess she just changed her mind. When I stepped inside My favorite song was playing .. so loud And once you've heard it, you took my hand in yours and smiled you: Hey, this is our song since now!! Since then I got this feeling, this awesome feeling inside I'm with the right person and the nite has just begun You're full of surprises, beautiful and kind For me you are so special, I'll roll my dice tonight. Next thing I know, we were back in the car The music was playing loud, you were driving too far The last stop we've made, was at the hotel I'm staying You grabbed me in your arms and .. and then's when it started ... raining. The weather gets colder, your hand is on my shoulder, I ask you if you want to come and wait inside. The fireplace is on, your clothes are on the stove I bring you comfy clothes, while you're in the shower. The rain is falling from the sky, the night is deep, looks black and white I pour you a glass of wine while getting closer. The electricity goes off, all of a sudden We're in the dark, the music stops - I lit (up) a candle. Looks like the rain has stopped now (or for the moment) I pour you another glass of wine.. I touch your hand, you're grabbing mine And pull me closer. The last thing I remember, you were playing through my hair I felt your (warm) breath down on my neck and I've kissed your shoulder Slowly, you laid me down, on the floor, whispering something in my ear Your fingers were walking down my spine, I've closed my eyes.. that's when we've kissed. We've spent the night together, sleeping in each other arms I was your blanket, you were my pillow - the dawn was coming fast. I woke up and.. watching you sleeping You found me smiling when you've opened your eyes. Things went so fast - time was flying by Only four days, until we say goodbye. All the sand from the beach, the pictures framed in our minds The scrambled eggs in the mornings, (all those) kisses (stolen) through the night. While I'm counting the seconds, my mind is flying away From the moment we've met, to the last thing you'll say. I just wish, this day to last forever I hope our story will never have an end. In the airport, while waiting for our planes to come Our silly love song was playing one more time And once again, you took my hand in yours and smiled That's when you've asked me, if I want to be ... your wife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/5/2015 2:31:00 PM
Wonderful story, SA. Check out the contests if you want more visibility for your poems. Welcome!
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Date: 10/15/2015 8:11:00 AM
This is a truly lovely love story, I hope the story has continued to be a happy one. You are a talented story teller, let me know when you post more poems.
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Date: 3/3/2014 3:15:00 PM
Ps., I Would Love To See A Sequel Unto Your Beauty's Captivating Verse, Sweet Beautiful Girl! So, Keep Brushing ~ My Love, Always & Forever, John
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Date: 3/3/2014 3:27:00 PM
Thank you, John :) I'll try my best ... but I'm afraid I'll ruin it in the end.. well, will see what happens :D Thank you! Looking forward to your new work.. :) Love and Hugs, South xx
Date: 3/3/2014 11:31:00 AM
Hi south aqua: A beautiful poem from beginning middle and end. First love is always the best. Welcome to a group of poets that will always encourage and inspire you as they have done with me. Please check me out and say hello.
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Date: 3/3/2014 1:46:00 PM
Hi Ralph :) Thank you for such an warm welcome. :D Indeed, first love is the best.. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem, it means a lot! Looking forward to see your work and maybe, keep in touch.. take care! Hugs xx South
Date: 3/3/2014 9:06:00 AM
Hey Girl, Your Beauty Is Looking Natural! Aside This I Love Your Wonderful Love Story And Could Find It's Tale Amid Her Movie Script....Congratulations, Upon Your Precious Heart's Being Featured At Her Loving's PoetrySoup And Everyone Is Left Asking: Did She Say Yes ? Love John
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Date: 3/3/2014 1:42:00 PM
Hey there, Johnny :) thanks for taking the time and for stopping by... it surely means a lot :) :) :) Your encouraging words are always strong and straight forward, it gives me strength and even more inspiration for my future work.. Thank you so very much, my dear friend :) I don't know if She said Yes or No.. I guess that's asking for another poem :D Love and Hugs, South xx
Date: 3/1/2014 3:18:00 AM
Lots of mystery here and I feel like that part of your story hasn't changed.. That's a good thing! Welcome :)
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Date: 3/3/2014 1:34:00 PM
Hi Dave :) Thanks for taking the time and checking out this one too... Looking forward to read yours.. :) There's still so much for me to learn.. Thank you! Hugs xx South
Date: 2/18/2014 8:47:00 PM
South, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/19/2014 11:42:00 AM
hi LINDA :) Thanks for the warm welcome, I enjoy being here and to be part of this beautiful community. :) As you know, I'm new here, but thanks to you and to other friendly souls here, I think I already love this place.. so it only remains for me to try to know you better (and vice versa) and don't be afraid to ask for help. Take care as well :) Thank you!! Hugs xx South
Date: 2/14/2014 1:57:00 PM
what a beautiful poem, made my spine tingle. Jan x
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Date: 2/14/2014 2:10:00 PM
hi Jan :) Thank you, I'm glad you like it. I'm even more glad that I succeed to gave you the exact emotion I was going through while writing it... Hugs xx South
Date: 2/14/2014 11:00:00 AM
This piece is so beautiful. I hope it is true. It sounds like one of my daydreams....Hugs Tim
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Date: 2/14/2014 2:06:00 PM
hi Tim :) Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. It means a lot. It was true, once upon a time but unfortunately now is nothing but a poem.. Hugs xx South
Date: 2/14/2014 2:16:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,South- I choose your first very good written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/14/2014 2:05:00 PM
hi Anne-Lise :) Thank you for the warm welcome to the Soup Family and for your encouraging words, it means a lot. Hope to see you around... Hugs xx South
Date: 2/13/2014 6:06:00 PM
Wow, I Absolutely Love Your Beauty's Final Stanza It's Breathy As Captivating Conclusion, Sweet Beautiful Girl! ~ I Am Going To Favour Her Loveliness Upon This Very Note: 'Our Silly Love Song;' Tis So Beautiful! ~ Welcome, To Her Loving's PoetrySoup ~ My Love, Forever, John
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Date: 2/14/2014 2:05:00 PM
hi John :) Thank you for your kind - beautiful words. I appreciate it. I'm glad you liked my very 1st poem and have to admit I'm still nervous for even posting it here... Hugs xx South
Date: 2/13/2014 4:09:00 PM
wow, Interesting... South Aqua.. , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/14/2014 2:05:00 PM
well hello SKAT :) Thank you for the welcoming, I appreciate your words.. and I'd like to be friends. About me - well, that's for me to know and for you to find out.... right?! I'd like to let my poems tell you more about me. In the mean time, I'm still trying to find out how things are working around here, because as you know I'm a new bee... Hugs xx South